Reviews for For Duty and Honor

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tambrathegreat 2008-09-25 ch 16,	abuseI loved this story. I do hope you decide to continue it. Miss Sarah Sue Rae is probably my favorite snake character ever. There were some really sublime moments of tenderness shown to Harry in this and you handled Snape's change of opinion and shift of focus well. He hasn't changed too quickly for belief, yet with each chapter you have depicted him softening towards the boy. I loved the Weasley council that visited Snape. That was appropriate and very funny. Also what Gred and Feorge did to Umbridge with Snape's help was hilarious. I also like the idea of Snape having had a family and lost them. (Not the losing part so much as that he could love) I do hope you elaborate on that. Also, I sensed a little connection to the Social Worker from Snape, might there be something there? Great job, please continue with this story. I've enjoyed it immensely.
ImUpToNoGood 2008-09-25 ch 16,	abuseI am loving this! Snape is so in character. I like the reluctant responsibility we see. I like that he is starting to see Harry, but does not immediately like him. I like that his pride in himself and his ethics make him do things he would rather not do. Harry's character makes sense for one with his background: the combination of prickly and needy, self sufficient and wanting, strong and uncertain. Love that you are getting him glasses, not because the old ones are "ugly" as so many fanficcers have it, (I always liked them on him) but because they are not functional. Sarah Sue Ray is lovely, and her personality is wonderful. I also like the little changes you make to canon. What would happen if Harry started trusting adults just a tiny bit? Even though many things turned out the same, I think Harry's sense of guilt won't overwhelm him quite so much as in canon, since he did have a chance to talk with Sirius in the mirrors, since the choices were not his alone. Well done. Can't wait to read the next chapter. I can't wait to see where you take this.
storylistener 2008-09-22 ch 16,	abuseAh! We just got to the good part (Harry dealing with the abuse)! I can't see anything wrong with this story, other then I want more. Great Story! GOOD JOB and WRITE MORE SOON!
Wings of the Night 2008-09-21 ch 1,	abuseIt's a great story! I really liked it. Are you going to continue this story? I hope you do =3
jojobevco 2008-08-19 ch 16,	abusegread story!
The Dead Snake 2008-08-16 ch 13,	abuseOnce again, brilliant! That Snape is diciplining (Sp?) Malfoy. I hope he becomes good, too. On to read the next chapter! (I like this story.)
The Dead Snake 2008-08-16 ch 12,	abuseI haven't even finished reading this chapter yet, but I have to say something- you are freaking brilliant! Myrtle as a spy! I never even thought of that! Hey, if I ever write again, can I borrow that? That is just too brilliant! On to read the rest.
The Dead Snake 2008-08-16 ch 16,	abuseTHis story is awesome. And funny. But I think I'm missing something... was there a prequel? Ima go look.
Badbonita 2008-07-25 ch 16,	abuseInteresting - my review went away without my pressing submit. Anyway, the Inquisitor Squads are going to be on Umbridge's side while the others are going to be on Harry's. This could be another point that helps Harry's relationship with Severus. Unfortunately, it's been almost a year since you last updated. Hopefully, you'll find the time/inspiration to do so soon.
RAV 2008-07-17 ch 16, anon.	abuseVary good story I hope you havent given it up i want to know how it ends
lady-pumpkin-pie 2008-07-14 ch 16,	abuseI've really enjoyed this so far! I can't wait to hear more about Harry gets on living with Snape for the summer. Please update soon!
Stelladoro 2008-07-11 ch 16,	abuseCan't wait to read the next chapter, awesome story!
KawaiiCherryStar 2008-07-09 ch 16,	abuseI really like your story and I hope that you'll update sometime. I luv Sarah Sue Rae, she's hilarious, i've always loved stories when harry either has a snake familiar or is just simply friends with one. Congrats on da story so far, it's very realistic and your not jumping into things to fast. I like the bit with the twins and ron's relationship wid harry, I luv da twins! They're so funny.
hypercell 2008-07-07 ch 16,	abuseThe Part with the Snake is very Funny. I loved it! Please write more as fast as you can, and post It please!
coffee walnut 2008-07-07 ch 16,	abusejust came across your story... very interesting read!! waiting for more...

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