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| Emador 2007-01-11 ch 13,  | abuseThat kid that was all 'ew' cracked me up...and Christian...oh my...it's the middle of a party for crying out loud, LOL. Jannie in a toga--LOL. Good chapter! Sorry it took me so long to review. |
| NellieBly413672 2007-01-07 ch 13, | abusegreat chapter! it was so funny when he was in the mask and like freaking her out and stuff. if that wouldve happened to me I would've like beaten him up lol. And I'm sorry I didn't review earlier. I didn't see it up when you updated. I'm gonna put you in my story alert section so I know next time. Anyways, good chapter :) |
| vaughnloveralwaysandforev 2007-01-04 ch 13, | abuseNice chapter. I thought I reviewed the other day, but apparantly I forgot or it didn't work or whatever. Anyway, great job. Can't wait to read more! |
| Bluehaven4220 2006-12-10 ch 12, | abuseI like it, it's good. Hope there's more coming. |
| Emador 2006-10-26 ch 12, | abuseLOL, randomly talking about places to have sex...how about just HAVING first? LOL. Great chapter--enjoyed it much. |
| Flowersc781 2006-10-25 ch 12, | abuseI am caught up and as always Ralph is a sweetie and a half. Where do I get one like him?! Awesome job!! |
| vaughnloveralwaysandforev 2006-10-23 ch 12, | abuseAww, cute chapter...and I liked the conversation at the end. Very funy. Anyway, great job and I can't wait to read more. Ralph and Avery are so cute together! |
| NellieBly413672 2006-10-22 ch 12, | abusegood chapter. i liked it =) |
| vaughnloveralwaysandforev 2006-10-08 ch 11, | abuseI'm finally all caught up. Yay! I really like your story. Great chapter. Ralph and Avery are so cute together. Can't wait to read more! |
| vaughnloveralwaysandforev 2006-10-08 ch 9, | abuseI loved the ending of that chapter! Ralph is so sweet! Before reading this story, I never really liked Ralph too much. Well, not that I didn't like him, but I never really had an opinion. Great job! |
| vaughnloveralwaysandforev 2006-10-08 ch 6, | abuseI just started reading this story, and I love it! I decided to review for this chapter along the way of reading the others, cause I loved it. Their question game thing was cute. The "Have you ever killed a man?" question sounded pretty familiar...like maybe from Lost? lol I liked the dog's name too, Midnight. When I was little I had a black lab, shepard mix named Midnight. Anyway, great job and now I'm off to read the other chapters! |
| NellieBly413672 2006-10-03 ch 11, | abuseomg! i love your story. i just read the whole thing and it's wicked good! I'm glad Coxie finally gets his own story lol. well, i can't wait til you update again! oh and thanks for that shout out in chapter 8...i think...lol :) |
| Emador 2006-10-01 ch 11, | abuseWho's Holly again? Loved this chapter--great job. Can't wait for more. |
| Emador 2006-08-19 ch 9, | abuseCute ending. This was a good chapter...kinda of hard to keep all the OC's straight, especially since the updates are far in between, but this was a good chapter. Can't wait for more! |
| Flowersc781 2006-08-19 ch 9, | abuseThat was some crazy ** party! The way people were shocked at Avery being out was kind of sad. Poor thing has a reputation of a party pooper. But Coxy wanting her to be his girlfriend mde it all awesome. |