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Arbella Scott 2008-06-29 ch 1,	abuseWow, that was really great! Poor Lucia... I love the Lucia/Janaff pairing...way better than sticking her with Bastian. I might start writing a fic about them...yeah I most likely will since you gave me some ideas. Okay, I got totally off topic there... So anyway, it was a great fic!
TheTwilightRurouni 2008-06-20 ch 1,	abuseWow, that was good, not that I expected otherwise since this is the first time I've read your work. I enjoyed it, it was appropriately agnsty, it made sense, and I liked the holy texts. Of course, Lucia could probably take comfort in the fact that none of her close circle of friends would ever betray her, namely Elincia, Ike, and her brother, after what they went through with both wars. On the technical side, I didn't see any blatant errors, and I am one to blow the whistle on those, so nice job with spelling and grammar. Ja, mata! (I really need to stop using romaji) Twilight Rurouni
Aquatic-Idealist 2008-01-21 ch 1,	abuseImpressive indeed. It's rather interesting how you've created your own holy book for Tellius. That shows great creativity, the trait that an alarming number of people on this site seem to lack. You've done well with this fic. We cringe and bite our fingernails in Lucia's honor, hoping that nothing will happen to her. Good job!
HikariAkizakura 2007-10-04 ch 1,	abuseNo Janaff is NOT a girl!(had to let that out) Awsome story! I just love it! Keep up the good work!
BlackChaos105 2007-06-13 ch 1,	abuseThe story was good...but please remember...JANAFF IS A GIRL! Remember! Ulki is the male "Ears" of Tibarn, Janaff, his female "Eyes"! Please, redo this. It was good, but the characters need to be corrected.
Duderly Bob 2007-03-13 ch 1,	abuseWell done! A very well written one shot! Personally I failed to catch the angsty drift, but lately angst hasn't been effecting me much, so maybe I'm just getting immune to the writing style. Anyway, all in all it was well done. Though, personally I'm going to quibble over the lines from the Rjaskin. In Mordecai's A support with Steffan, the last line said by Steffan is (In reference to Ashera's rules on Branded): "Perhaps her laws aren't what we think." To me, this seems to state that the whole shunning of Branded is more or less due to predjudice, given some religious spin, probably by pulling out some vague portion of text. As far as I know, Stefan isn't the type of character just to blindly ignore something so blatantly stated, so the line doesn't make sense in context of that. Anyway, that's the only real thing I could think of to complain about, so I'll stop typing now! :P With Regards, Duderly Bob
Iron's Grasp 2006-12-31 ch 1,	abuseNice...haven't seen a fic like this in a while. It was very convincing, and the part about Branded is true. In case you didn't know, Soren is a Branded.
Subtle Insanity 2006-10-17 ch 1,	abuseThat is pure quality writing. The surprise ending really added the touch needed to liven this up. Now I understand why so many respect you. J "Courage without experience is suicide."
RandomTopic 2006-10-03 ch 1,	abuseThat's sad...but I liked this, especially the two last lines.
Elf Princess Kiri 2006-09-07 ch 1,	abuseAw. Sad but sweet. I like this pairing. I only have their first converstaion though. Gotta try gotta try...Later!
Story Weaver1 2006-07-02 ch 1,	abuseI like it. The intersections of a 'holy book' were a nice touch. Though I don't see why you choose this pairing.
Ice Seraphim 2006-06-03 ch 1,	abuseHey, I found this story in the Circle of Reviews forum. I must say, this is really well done. You've truly captured Lucia's emotions through the various thoughts in her mind. She seems to be in character as well (at least as far as I could tell from the small bit I saw of her in the game). Your timeline of Janaff and Lucia's relationship is really well thought out, and seems believable for both the characters and the plot of the game. One little thing that may add to the story is perhaps including snippets of their conversations as you describe the progress in their relationship. Of course, what you have right now is amazing already ^_^ This is one of my favourite pairings, and I'm so happy to see such a well written story about these two. Wonderful work, and good luck to you and your future writing. -Ice Seraphim
Gunlord500 2006-05-17 ch 1,	abuseAs part of my "Little Circle of Reviewyness" crusade, I'm reviewing this fic. I hope you find my review helpful...although I doubt it, since there's little I can do but gush ^^ This is a very good piece of work! There's only one minor little thing I would change in terms of diction... "struggles to resurrect Crimea to its former glory were long and hard" I would say either, "the struggle to resurrect Crimea's former glory" or "the struggle to return Crimea to its former glory" ^_^ Just a small diction thing. Beyond that, very. very nice. Your quotes from the 'Rjaskin' sound almost authentic, to the point where I wonder if you took them right from the game! I really like how you portray Lucia and Janaff's relationship, and the very ending, where she reveals she's pregnant, is very well written. An excellent story all around, I'm glad I read it :)
Pureauthor 2006-04-18 ch 1,	abuseI guess I'm not the only one, but I loved your Holy Book 'excerpts'. They're spot on in terms of tone and style. As for the main bulk of the story, Lucia's guilt and self-torment seems real. I can't really comment on characterization, but I will say that Lucia is a completely believable as a character. That's good. No glaring grammar explosions, so, good job, I say.
Faded-Song 2006-04-12 ch 1,	abuseJust wow. That has got to be one of the best one shot's I've ever read. The ending got me though, it was awesome and sad at the same time.

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