I like it a lot. It's way too short though. Such a good story should have been drawn our, so there was more of it. =)

awsome! i absolutely love it! is it done? if it isnt, please write more!

Okay, I thought I reviewed this... Oh well, here it is anyway. I liked this first chapter. I've not seen this type of Ranma/Nabiki much where she actually loved the art. The only other that I can think of right off at the moment would be Nabiki's Secret, which I think is by innortal. Oh well, good start and I hope to see another chapter. And I'd like to know what Ranma's destiny is.
Next?

ok for the next few lines... please don't get mad for waht i'm about to say...

Ok you shithead... what the ** if up with the fact that you haven't updated this fic yet man... i been waitin 6 god damn ** years fo you to update this one... what the ** is wrong wit you man... i love this thing... if i don't see something soon for this i'm kick your **... i'll make your life a livin hell, if its already one, i'll make it even worse.. lol...

Sorry about that... my inner demon got losse on me, and i had ta killem. again sorry about that...

send me a message telling me why ya haven't updated this yet...

Ryu_Vision

just woundering if your going to do a soinf of of this one?

I've never read a story were the auther took this path.It is truly fansinating.I enjoy it greatly.Please keep writing.

You had some neat things going on here. Ive seen the hidden art or repressed training in the other sisters before (as being part of a martial arts family makes it easy to assume that the elder sisters had trained at some point), its the first time ive seen this take as a reason instead of Ms. Tendo's death. While Ranma giving up his feelings for Akane seems a little fast, his protecting Nabiki and soured feelings from learning the orgin of the scar are understandable and mesh well with his character. The ending had a nice open but closed feel to it and was heart warming. The final scene does work to help explain ooc behavior and work as a hook for following chapters, but doesnt seem needed(though it doesnt detract).

A great story. You really delve deep into the characters, and explain things with great enough detail to pull the readers in, but not too much to bog down the story.

I look forward to reading more of your work, and hope you still continue writing.

Innortal

I found the story intresting. And woud like to see it contued.

"CSMars" obviously hasn't done much looking past the exterior. I'd go so far as to say there's not much OOCness here. I'll admit to some Nabiki bias, and I do think Akane is a self-centred **. I don't really mind the other pairings suggested, although the Kasumi one needs work (I've read good ones, and lots of bad ones). A tad short perhaps, but a nice fic nonetheless. Of course, given the date, I think this one is pretty much dead. May hijack the idea sometime.

It's been years since you created this fic and I'm still waiting for you to continue it. This is really interesting. What destiny are they talking about. Please continue this as it is a really good fic and has promise to be a one of the best.

Well what can i say except ... please continue this . Don't leave this as it is there has to be more especially since nabiki can now defend herself against the other fiances PLUS use her brians as well.
Please keep this going!
dennisud

I may be a bit biased (anti-Akane!!!), but I thoroughly enjoyed this. I like the internal reflection and how Akane finally gets what's coming to her. IMO, the story doesn't need anything else added. Um, only complaint would be the last part regarding the goddesses. Kinda unnecessary, but I suppose it would make sense if this story is going to be continued.

This was an enjoyable story. I like how you delved into Nabiki's mind and explored *why* she became what she is. The weak part is Ranma's concrete acceptence of marriage. Instead of "Yes, I'm very sure", you could have had him reflect a bit more and leave it as "Yeah."

Just wondering, do you plan on writing more? I hope so!

this was sure somthing I never expected it was pretty good