YEAH, THAT'S THE WAY TO DO IT! This was extremely GOOD! Are you going to carry this further? Please do, I found this to be very INTERESTING... How would Nabiki macthup against Kuno?

Very good. Is that it?

Being a huge Ranma/Nabiki fan I like this. My only complaint is it's extremely OOC at the end. I can see tons of different ways the two would end up together just it's too fast for Ranma. If you continue it and I hope you do maybe add some backstory to Ranma actually noticing Nabiki before that morning, otherwise the end comes off contrived. The first 80% is well written and plausible just the end isn't.

Ken

This is a concept that should be developed further. I have always considered the Ranma/Nabiki pair-up a good substitute when for one reason or another Akane was not viable. While the standard Nabiki may not be a warrior she is mentally extremely powerful and in her own way every bit as effective as her sister. Let's see some more of this story developed soon.

Best wishes,

Lee A. Hollensteiner

Not bad. Not bad at all. It's plausible. Liked the flow of the backstory. The competitiveness. The secrecy. All of it did a good job on remaking a character's image. Only thing I had problem with is there being not enough focus on Akane's mental health. There's plenty on her angry behaviour, like in many other fics, but there's not enough on the problem behind the anger. Akane's mental health was mentioned a couple of times, but it needs to be more involved in the story. Otherwise, why mention it at all? You haven't written enough to link the two things together. If you're going to use Akane's mental health as the basis for her actions, she's going to need sympathy. You've already done so, in the way her father jumps to her defense, but it should probably be shown in that light. Lines showing Nabiki's pity for Akane, while she was talking about the unfairness of it all with Ranma, should reinforce the idea. Good story anyways. Enough to be a standalone.

How cute! I hope you planning on writing a sequel, or at least continue this. Bye-for-now

Really liked it. I hope you continue this as it will be interesting to see the reaction to everybody else and how Nabiki's life will change. Beware the freaks of the True Fiance for they will surely not find this very flattering. But I look forward to the next chapter.

Nice outlook but I sincerely hope that you would not have Nabiki love Ranma.. especially if you were trying to explain some of the characteristics found in the original Ranma 1/2. First, Nabiki deserves someone way better than Ranma. Actually, no one in the manga is fit to be somone she would cherish. Also, volume 17 where Nabiki becomes Ranma's fiance explains why Nabiki gets away from trouble... simply because she is smart...way smarter than any of the martial artists. Sure, Ranma can modify chi techniques to fit his abilities however anything without the words "martial arts" in it, he and the other characters are completely clueless. As for Akane being jealous of Nabiki, that's true. I really think she is jealous yet not because of the art but how Nabiki can control her feelings so well and express them. Nabiki definitely has the control that Akane lacks but it is totally in terms of emotions. Otherwise, i liked your theory though if you read the entire manga you could come out with a better one. Hope to read more of your writings.

Great. I loved it. So full of emotion and epathy. And such an unusual pairing. I've never seen a Ranma/Nabiki fic before. Continue or if not write something similar I think this has too much potential to be a stand alone fic

Not bad! I like it. Although my one suggestion would be to draw it out a bit more, it seems a bit to fast.

Alright...that does explain a lot, but I don't see how they could have let Akane stay like that for so long. And I don't think that things would be for the better. Akane would just slowly become more insane and it would be Ranma and Nabiki's fault. This isn't a flame, I hate flames, it's just that I don't agree with the story.

Hey, that was cool! Certainly a good explanation for why Nabiki can sneak up on Ranma and such. Pretty cool story too! GOod job :)