Wow. Just wow. The storyline is very intriguing, and that unexpected little shock in the first chapter was a nice touch. Admittedly, when Seth died I almost cried... and if that happens then you're doing a good job. I sincerely appreciate the lack of grammatical and spelling errors and I love how the story is told by Eirika.

My only complaint--update faster!

::Shadsie::

Names: Funny
Story: Magnificent
Effort: Grand
This is some splendid work I'm seeing. People in-character, new faces introduced calmly, backstory easy to catch up on. Very nice.

J

"Courage without experience is suicide."

Hello, Ms. Meelu! Since you posted this up in the Little Circle of Reviewyness, I hope you don't mind me reviewing it? ^_^

Truth be told, there's very little I'd change. Everybody's in character, you've utilized in-game dialogue well, you haven't made any grammatical or stylistic mistakes I could catch, and it's very well-written overall. This story really does sound very interesting, with the winged woman with the long nose appearing at the end. She's Nancy Noodlenose, I presume? ^_^ I look forward to seeing more of this work, and more of your other work! If this is any indication, you're a very good writer ^^

Well, that was... unexpected. With the story being so serious and all, I was wondering how the title would come into play, and then... whoa.

Well, your writing itself is superb as always, Meelu. I am intrigued by how this story will go, so update soon, if you will.

Breathtaking writing. Just beautiful. I hope you'll have more soon.

The narrative is told with an authentic sense of being a firsthand, spoken account.

The rest, uh, I can't say much, haven't played FE8 in English. But the twist at the end was certainly... most unexpected. Although since she mentioned that Seth had some sort of honor bestowed upon him later, it makes me wonder.

Intriguing story.