That was the funniest Mary-Sue-mocking one-shot I have ever read, and I've read some doozies. Keep up the good work!

lmao this is hilarious..u should make another one i really wanna see wat happens if she catches brooklyn

with the grace and ability to swim like an otter cat

I almost peed myself laughing when I saw that, as well as the refried bean tidal wave, and the random insertion of characters from other crazy stories. What a way to be comemorated by you, Magortney. I are lurv you. you rawk!

That was the freakiest thing I ever read. What are you on? By the way, did you make a submission to the Gathering Grimorum Anthology contest?

*snort*
*snicker*
BWAHAHAHAHA!!
And this is the third in the series? Must run to find the other two!

Oh, god, I love your Mary Sue stories. A few typos here and there, but still very fun. Thanks, I hope there's more of these soon.

My favorite line has to be, "get her technology!"

I've got a challenge for you...