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Sad Songs and Waltzes
2006-06-15 . chapter 1
Ahh, this rocked so hard. I love it when people write Darth Female Revan, such a manipulative, conniving woman. This was fantastically done, and even though I've always had a certain disliking for Carth I think you've managed to write him pretty well.
The Moon and Sun
2006-06-06 . chapter 1
Wow, That is very good writing, and I just loved the twist. You are a truly gifted writer I must say.

Keep Writing Please!
-Ryan
Amme Moto
2006-03-29 . chapter 1
It was really good. I liked it, even though Carth dies. ^_^ I'm in a depressed mood already. ^_^ It helped. Thanks! Props!
Dranzen
2006-03-29 . chapter 1
Very interesting one-shot. It was a neat twist, but it didn't really make much sense at first until I read it over, way more carefully.

What will everyone think, or will this just remain an unsolved mystery? =O Oh the drama!!

Very well-written. It kept me hanging right until the end!!

~Zen-chan
Reklar
2006-03-27 . chapter 1
An interesting one shot, Freesourceful, though rather short for me to get attached to either of the characters. It certainly does what you described in the author's note, and I'm glad you explained it since I've not come across the word before. Now, if only there were some sort of prequel to give more depth to this so I could honestly put it on my favorites list. ;)

-Reklar
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