that was such a sweet story, it was really good, you are a great writer.

Lovely, absolutely lovely.

Very good. Two thumbs up for you. :)

Do more, pretty please! Loved it. I just got finished reading the one about Christmas and I hope you decide to write more FMA! Ed and Winry were definitely meant to be... :)

This was so good and so sweet! You write really well, I'll have to check more of your work.

I really liked it and i hope you do more FMA in the future, but you did tend to use "would" a lot. there are other ways to phrase a sentace that would enhance the peice and make it feel less repetative.

(Not flaming or trying to be a dick, just trying to help)

two words (love it)

Good. More. Please. Good bye.

i really liked it kind of strange how all that got started though

aw... so sweet. especially ed. it was so nic eof him to confort winry when she was scared.

...VERY interesting...hehe...nice...good job...

YAY!! Awesome!! I loved it! I think that's one of the best EdxWinry stories! U ROC MY SOX!

I liked this fiction alot. Keep up tha good wrk. And when you make more tell me. I have to say again. I really enjoyed redin this. ^/^

awesome. i think the best lines were "At the moment, nothing else mattered but her. Nothing else in the world could stop him from lying there by her side in complete happiness. No science was involved, not alchemy. Not even equivalent exchange had anything to do with this feeling of being whole. To hear those three words made everything perfect"
they just fit perfectly, you know? great job!

SWET! that story is awesome not to lemony tho i liked it you should write more anywho yea great story bye!

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