C'est la vie, eh? I like this song, it was pretty good. Sui Cuil just become my new catch-phrase!

ooh. very pretty. i wish i knew how to translate... (i'm trying to learn quenya, but it's not working very well...) good job!

Pretty imagery... I luv it... WRITE MORE!
Kalle

Very nice imagery, but not very Tolkien. Other than the Sindarin, there is nothing to connect this to LOTR. However, if it is just your intention to write in Sindarin, then this has met that goal. I am ot sure of the narrator's goal in reciting this. And, how does it all tie into life?