that was an excellent story. i'm a tad surprised that hisoka came around in the end but not completely.

Aw! omg i was squeeling the entire time i read it...i just want to glomp you! Ah i love this pariing as disturbign as it is

love the story i will read now the sequal put i hope u update steadilly

aww, did you have to ruin such a nice fanfics with a 'jugment day' end? TT^TT

Wow!...I'm speech less.. I love Muraki.!
But i have one thing to say.
Why! Did you have to end it like that.
It's wonderful..story...(sniff..sniff). like please do like a part 2 or something i want to know... you could like make him pay for what he did, and he can stay with Tsuzuki. there is got to be more lemon!
sorry i'm weird, bye now

Wa~ wish that you've written what happens afterwards...but I guess leaving this to my imagination is good as well. Loved your ficcie!

Beautiful story. I loved it. Especially the chapters that included Tsuzuki's past. You made everything fit together so well. Excellent job on this.

Ah that was awesome! I love your story! GREAT STORY!

Okay, I'm sorry, but this was one of the worst fanfics I've ever read in my life.
Tsuzuki's thoughts about Hisoka being a brat really bugged me. You lost the cheerfulness of Tsuzuki in a lot of the story. The angst that comes with Tsuzuki was there, but in excessive amounts.
Don't even get me started on Muraki. I don't care if Muraki "changed"; he would never -let me repeat that- NEVER apologize for the deaths he has caused. Also, he would never admit to Tsuzuki that he loved him. Muraki does not truly love anyone. You made him too much a lover and not enough a cold-blooded killer, which is what he always has been and always will be. And even if Muraki did love Tsuzuki, he would never admit it first. He would wait for Tsuzuki to say it.
Your ending was one of cheesiest ever written. After catching Tsuzuki in bed with the enemy, I highly doubt that the entire staff of Ju-Oh-Cho would accept him back as quickly as they did.
Using slang really took away from the story. When you used words like "**" and "**", you really detracted from the emotion you were trying to invoke in your readers.
Last thing...
In my personal opinion, Muraki gave Tsuzuki oral sex way too much. Every time they met, Tsuzuki would be getting a **. It got really cliche after a while.
Work on keeping the characters in character. Watch the series or read the manga a few more times, then try your hand at this again.

WHAT THE **?? YOU HAVE TO TELL ME WHAT HAPPENED! TEL ME! I DEMAND TO KNOW DAMMIT DAMMIT WTF IS WRONG WITH YOU?? loved the story by the way nicely written good plot and character development.

Sleeping with the enemy is always a fun way to make an interesting plot and you did it. This story was so well done I litterally was on the verge of tears...It was intense man! Anyways the sex scences were SO freakin hot, that I...well you don't need to know (or maybe you do?//wink, wink, nudge, nudge//). Anyways make a sequel please...with kittys on top of icecream!!

Yay! Tsu got jealous.XD

Oh my, my, my! That was hot...and funny at places too.XD Totally love it! Though I think Tsu is a bit OOC at times like when he called or thought of Hisoka as a brat, it's still just slightly OOC. And I actually welcome that.lol I honestly felt that Hisoka was too bratty at times especially on the later volumes of the Yami manga!O_O

Anyway, I'm definitely adding this to my favorite stories list.:D Good luck to writing more mutsu!

Oh my gosh! You deserve much more reviews than this. This is by far one of the best Murakix Tsuzuki fanfics I've read. It's so hard to find a good story with this pairing, but it's my fave none the less. They were a little out of character, but whatever. The story still kicked butt.

Now this is more like it. =D It's pretty straightfoward in a very good way! I don't like when writers try to deepen their stories by inserting preposterously conceived ideas.