Nice ending.

I was half expecting Davis to add 'I wouldn't get caught'. Great Chapter. It'll be interesting to see who wins...

Interesting chapter. You DO Know that 'Yakari' makes little sense to someone who doesn't follow the japanese version, right? :p

I liked the epilogue! it had meaning! it was great ! ttfn

Very nice story. I enjoyed it all the way to the end.

Sorry, nothing witty to say. Just dropping by :)

Cracker

Great story! Who wins the contest?

OHOHOHOHOHHOHo!ONE OF MY FAVES! OH YEAH INSPIRATION! we at tkari international league want to say thank you to you, you did an exceptional job.!

ALRIGHT! I LOVE IT! I now know what to do with writers block. Thank you! (Looks for her inspiration)

That was really good! Please post Moonbeams and Sunlight as well as Lemon Cake and Vanilla Pudding! They sound interesting and I wanna read them!

Awesome! This was an awesome story! Write more Takari, please!

alright, u need to tell us who would win! this would be good to finish!

Steve Jester

Okay! Great story, I luv it! Please write either t.k. or Kari's story! It's up to you, the almighty powerfull great author who will soon be on my favs list!

dat was sweet. i luved this story i'm going to put it in my favorites.

great story! kepp up the good work! so who won the contest? kari or t.k?

Cute and kawaii, all at the same time! -_-;; TK was a real smooth operator in this; he got to kiss Kari without getting slapped. (Heh heh...) Oh, uh...later. Seth