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ReadingRed 2008-11-27 . chapter 1
This is a really nice story. I love the happy ending.
Swingflip 2008-09-02 . chapter 1
Aw! So cute! I love it. Its a great ending! I hope you write more!
Nicole Gruebel 2008-08-23 . chapter 1
I just watched the movie (once more), and this is a perfect story to keep the magic of it alive a bit longer!
PaddySnuffles 2008-02-15 . chapter 1
Aw! that was sweet! And very well written. =) Will you continue the story? I think you should, its got great potential. ^_^
tammyy2j 2007-07-26 . chapter 1
that was brillant
LadyEowyn23 2007-05-03 . chapter 1
Hm. Lovely. I loved the film and have spent time wondering and creating in my head what could have happened after the film ended. I love this piece you have done and can visualize it, hear Kevin ( Gerry Butler dreamy sigh ensues) and his Scottish brogue, smell the salt air and perhaps imagine that I am the one in his arms, the first person pov certainly was great.
Tracy137 2007-01-09 . chapter 1
This was beautifully written; you picture every part of it,even smell the ocean.

I think this would have made a much better ending for the film than the one we were given; although the film ended on a note of hope it didn't really have the warmth the rest of the film had had.

This would have been the icing on the cake; well done for writing such an excellent piece. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Amokitty 2006-11-21 . chapter 1
I am such a HUGE fan of this movie! Your story is every bit as melancholy and heartfelt as what I saw on the big screen.

It was a little bit confusing for me with the switch to Lizzie's point of view mid-story; but the dialogue had the same minimalist feel as the movie. Your descriptions are very detailed and it gives the story more drama.

I loved the ending! It was a real pleasure reading this.
Christine Writer 2006-10-16 . chapter 1
YAY! CUTE--love it so much! Very complete!
Kelsismom 2006-06-29 . chapter 1
That was very sweet. You didn't need a lot of detail or dialogue to get your point across. I liked that.

The only thing that was a little confusing was the switching from third to first person (Lizzie's point of view)in the middle.

I enjoyed it. I hope you try writing more fics.
jayma 2006-06-25 . chapter 1
It doesn't matter how many times I watch that movie, lol, I always cry at the end, haha. I absolutely loved this story...it's so beautifully written! ^_^
flipfloppery 2006-06-18 . chapter 1
I LOVE that he said it-I thought for sure she'd be saying it. I love it! I think you should write more. :)
Midnight Raptor 2006-05-29 . chapter 1
awesome fic!!i especially loved the ending.it was so sweet.great writing!!:)
the Mouse in the Opera House 2006-03-28 . chapter 1
*SIGH* That's so--*mouse passes out*
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