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Reviews For: Forever Waiting

FujixSaku0709
2007-11-18
ch 1,
abuseT.T samishii na...commenting?! aitsu! Ryoma likes TOMO?! DX
keikeiaznqueen
2006-03-31
ch 1,
abuseGah! I love the way you write this!

"For me there’s life.

And then there’s you."

"I was twelve.

And now seventeen."

I love these two bits. They contrast, and they make sense. =)

The only thing I can say about this is that, you know when you have two speeches together? Separate them into 2 paragraphs.

Instead of this:

“He’s not here is he…” “No…he’s not…I’m sorry”

You have this

“He’s not here is he…”

“No…he’s not…I’m sorry.”

=)

This is sad though. Did Sakuno die?
SilverLastsForever
2006-03-31
ch 1,
abuseAw, this is sad! Short, but I think it works for this fic. Very good.
iZuMeRo-cHaN
2006-03-29
ch 1,
abuseplease make it a ryomaXtomo
Pure Essence
2006-03-29
ch 1,
abuseWAH *cries* Sakuno sounds suicidal >.>

EVIL RYOMA!! *thwaks* anyways, nice fic =/ so sad though ^^"
archer-razilia
2006-03-29
ch 1,
abuseAw that's sad...always waiting, always waiting. But may I as...who is the other person Sakuno was talking to? Tomoka-chan? :)
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