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| FujixSaku0709 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abuseT.T samishii na...commenting?! aitsu! Ryoma likes TOMO?! DX |
| keikeiaznqueen 2006-03-31 ch 1, | abuseGah! I love the way you write this! "For me there’s life. And then there’s you." "I was twelve. And now seventeen." I love these two bits. They contrast, and they make sense. =) The only thing I can say about this is that, you know when you have two speeches together? Separate them into 2 paragraphs. Instead of this: “He’s not here is he…” “No…he’s not…I’m sorry” You have this “He’s not here is he…” “No…he’s not…I’m sorry.” =) This is sad though. Did Sakuno die? |
| SilverLastsForever 2006-03-31 ch 1, | abuseAw, this is sad! Short, but I think it works for this fic. Very good. |
| iZuMeRo-cHaN 2006-03-29 ch 1, | abuseplease make it a ryomaXtomo |
| Pure Essence 2006-03-29 ch 1, | abuseWAH *cries* Sakuno sounds suicidal >.> EVIL RYOMA!! *thwaks* anyways, nice fic =/ so sad though ^^" |
| archer-razilia 2006-03-29 ch 1, | abuseAw that's sad...always waiting, always waiting. But may I as...who is the other person Sakuno was talking to? Tomoka-chan? :) |