  Mireille 11/7/05 . chapter 1 A very interesting beginning, but you need to write the second half of this story, please :) You play with so many elements that 'should' have been in Ep I that I'd just like to know the rest of your vision on those events :) Please!
Keep it up!
Mireille '.' |
| Doreen 4/13/05 . chapter 1 Cool story. |
 SuziWan 12/11/02 . chapter 1Wow I like your writing! It's very dynamic. I'm hoping you have a continuation of this story too... |
| Savy 10/6/00 . chapter 1 Wow...this is good...I like it! |
| Kelsey 7/17/00 . chapter 1 Absolutely beautiful. And somewhat heart breaking in away, knowing what the whole outcome of the story comes too.. I like your version better then any of the others i have read..great job! keep writing .. - |
| Charisma 6/12/00 . chapter 1 MAKE A SEQUEL FOR CRYING OUT LOUD! |
| I am Amidala 4/25/00 . chapter 1 Totally wizard! really neat. More More more! |
| Andy 9 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Great story. I always assumed that Obi-Wan would help to hide the twins, but you were able to put a fresh twist on that. I am eager to read more of your prequel stories. |
| The Almighty One 10 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Great Story! |
| Angel 8 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Very good story although I doubt that Amalida and Obi-Wan will kiss.
You should make a sequal. |
| Dawn 8 4/11/00 . chapter 1 One of the best Episode III stories I have read - I really liked the way you wrote Obi-Wan. Well done! |
| Trapture 5 4/11/00 . chapter 1 I'm glad GL's writing it... |
| julie 10 4/11/00 . chapter 1 great story! very well written and interesting. |
| Disyre Fantazzie Sarin 10 4/11/00 . chapter 1 VERY NICE STORY!
I give it 2 thumbs way _way_ up! Congrats! You should be right up there with Timothy Zahn for this work! |
| Renee Y. Bowser 7 4/11/00 . chapter 1 A very good story, reads more like a mystery novel |
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