   BlondeBrooke 2008-11-15 . chapter 1i really loved it plz make the next chapter soon |
 paulina 2007-08-23 . chapter 1 um... hi
your fiction was very creative though I was cut from it... because... haven't you finish the other chapter??
I just wanna ask because I think I love your story
thank you |
| radar 2007-05-28 . chapter 1 WOW! It was very dramatic! I love the detail! ( i cant write detail.At all.) I admire your work! |
| michi-baka 2007-03-21 . chapter 1 ah that is so cute aw |
| Emmi 2007-01-29 . chapter 1 OMG R U CARRYING ON WITH THIS? mUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! |
 Lina Mistress of Elements 2007-01-03 . chapter 1Woah |
 Hiei's Cute Girl 2006-05-22 . chapter 1A bit of help from another struggling author: Watch out with your grammar, and the way you organize things. Even silly mistaked like those bring forth some dumb flamer. Be carfull, k? And good luck on the next chappie! |
| sex kitten 2006-05-12 . chapter 1 great i lov it cant wait for more |
| ^_____^ 2006-04-30 . chapter 1 we!! please update soon!! XD great start!! ^_^ please please? |
| FireyNinja 2006-04-23 . chapter 1 Great story, please update soon! Can't wait! |
 Feather's Shadow 2006-04-18 . chapter 1Up date soon I like it! |
 EWHH its Kenna 2006-04-01 . chapter 1interesting update soon plz! |
| ??? 2006-03-30 . chapter 1 nice atory can't wait til the next one |
 Lady Tamakizu 2006-03-29 . chapter 1good start update soon please |
| Mad 2006-03-29 . chapter 1 lolz, finally a new piece
heh, i like it, espiecially becouse she really kidnapped, Sasuke'a not just blabbling around what would it be if she was |
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