haha... this is awesome! Thank you for this great fanfic... and now, I'm off to read your other one... xD

Nice crossover story. A fun and interesting plot. Could use a beta for spelling errors that are actual words but not the one you meant to use, but otherwise a great effort. I'd give it an 87 out of 100.

Good, but since I also watch Numb3rs I could tell that the characters were SLIGHTLY OOC, especially the following passage from Don:
“Did I hear you correctly Alex?” Don asked. “You want to take that class? You want to take that class from the daughter of a drunken German immigrant that didn’t know English, an illegal immigrant?”
I LOVE the opener, though: "The gunshot broke into Alex Rider’s musings as his classmates quickly fell to the ground, hands over their heads along with Mr. Donovan, shaking with fear. While Alex had just remained in his seat."
Then Alex points out that Colin chose a really bad room to capture. Good story!

Cool! even though it's finished I'll be expecting a lot from this fic! And i'll expect more from your other fics

Awesome story! Read mine sometime!! Once again, awesome job!

WOW...i just read that in one go...that was totally wicked...omg now that its over i think im going to cry...(*_*)

Neat fic! I love it!

It was the best Alex Rider fanfiction that I ever read. You really are a pro. If I were you I would start wrighting novels and try to get them published. Keep going, I'll be rooting for you.

“Well you’re in luck; this watch has been genetically modified from its predecessors."

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do you realize a watch doesn't have any genetics to modify? you might want to change that word for something a little more appopos

that was a really great story. it was well written and you had a great plot.

great! fantastic ending Are you going to write anotherone? you should this is great!

Wonderful story. Well done-I really enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good work!

I can't thank you enougt for this fanfic... it's really the best in the net.
I did like the Eppey brothers before, but in combination with Alex it was really interesting.
I just wish that the FF would be longer... but you can't have all, right?
The death of Munchie was funny... in a way. ^^" I did hope that the others ask more questions about Alex and the bomb...
But all in all a good enjoyable FF. I hope that there are soon more storys like this about Alex.
bye

I loved your story.=P

I'll miss this book. It was really good. Methinks you should write a sequal. Well, you're on A/A for next time!