OH MY GOSH! i loved this with all my heart. i could IMAGINE how Minako said 'ask him WHY'perfect! thank you for writing!

The story was great!

The only thing I didn't like in your writing style was this paragraph:

Mamoru stopped again for a moment, eyes cloudy at the memory. "Motoki yanked me off my stool and forced me into the back room and just started going off on me. 'Why can't you just leave her alone, Mamoru? Why do you always have to put her down, make her feel like nothing? I know you don't think anything of her, but maybe if you just stopped and really looked at her once you would see what the rest of the world sees in her! You were really out of line today; she came in to tell me that her grandmother just passed away and asked if I could let her friends know that was why she wouldn't be there to meet them.' Then he just walked off and I stayed in the back room thinking for awhile about what I had done."

Really, who talks this way? It's really doubtful Mamoru would talk like that. It would have been better to write what Motoki said in passive and not having Mamoru trying to imitate him...

omg you should do another chapter or at least an epilogue cuz i rly want to know what would happen next

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sequel sequel sequel sequel! PLease! i want to see what darien says to her and how she reacts!

totally awesome story!

brilliant _

aww this was so cute

Are you going to continue this story? It's really interesting so far.

Oh, that was just to cute! Thought, I wonder how mad Mamoru will be when he finds out, Usagi is really Sailor Moon.

KAWAII KAWII KAWAII! Omg, so KAWAII! Good job, loved the ending. Really cute!

if i was serena i would have hit darien

but that's just me.

still its a cool story.

there should be another one or something. i loved it!

that was so cute! mamoru asking sailor moon for an autograph! oh LOL! this fic totally brightened my day.

great work! :D

cute... well done!

*Sam*

aw, that was funny. He seemed so desperate when he was asking Sailor Moon for the autograph. So cute. 10/10 rating.

BloomAmber

omg so cute!