This is good, I didn't like the ending as much as the rest of the story, but its still a great story!

LOL very cute

great fic! I love the last part! “It’s professor Lupin. Seems like he’s giving some private lessons!” I love that line!

Ah, that's sweet of you to dedicate a fic to me, papoose! This was a nice one shot; I especially liked the couple being interrupted by the Weasley twins! I can see your writing has really improved too, just watch the grammar.
Keep writing ^_^

For a first fic, I thought it was really good. I love the RL/NT ship. I think you got their personalities really good. Hope you do more stories about them.
~*Ranna*~