YAY! They found some gargoyales. That is a bit odd how they had four move in in one night. I have a feeling there's some great important mystery about Gold. I can't wait to find out what it is.

WOW! tha's practically all I can think of right now. WOW! The first chapter was amazing! I know hardly anything happened, but it was amazing! I love the explanation at the beginning of how everything came to be. Great job! ON to the next chapter!

Ooh, mysterious. I wonder what the connection between Jigen and Boober could be.

So I guess it's pretty clear that Jigen's role in this fic is pretty important, seeing as how you're giving him POVs.

Hey, Phenom here. I figured I might as well start leaving reviews since I'm up to chapter 3. This one was pretty ammusing, despite the fact that I had no idea who the Fraggles are(I looked them up though). Now, onto chapter 4.

Ai, I was just hoping that I would hear something for you.

Well written. A little bit all over the place, and a bit jagged, but well handled considering the situation.

Still looking forward as always, just to pressure you. xD J/k.

heh, i'm in love!
if Bender happens to be the one andonly futurama bender XD and i think he is!
oh and the scotish girl is so hard to understand... i get a headache trying to read what she says!
besides that. very good indeed.
will read this tomorow, for now i'm the one who needs sleep!
good night!

Please don't let this story die before its end. 90% of the stories here and in end up dead before they are finished. i like this one to much. even if i am the only one reading it know you'll have a reader to the end!

Great chapter as always! I think its a lot more discriptive then the first part, great job guys!
Alaina

Excellent work so far, soldier. Your solid work is a credit to yourself and your comrades-in-arms. Keep this up and you'll definitely receive a promotion!

Remember: Service guarantees citizenship!

I meant to review this the day you posted it. X-X

Well, Your certainly leading onto a new era here, but don't forget your old stuff. The best stories link the beginning, middle and end together in one weave or so. Just a heads up.

The unicorn must be damn cute. You have to draw Unico now. It is your destiny.

And of course, I have to leave. -_-'

*Dies* Okay, I have a feeling this is going to be REALLY long, so get yourself a snack, and possibly something to drink if you're going to try and take this all in one shot.

1) I can tell that in your latter chapters, I have been seeing that my advice got a bit of light. ^^ Vewy happy. ^^ Things are a bit smoother that way, and more details have been able to squish their way in there without short-circuiting my eyes with to much info at once. *glomp*

2) I love the idea of the Fey among the peeps. That entire scenario with Reno was a wonderfully entertaining course in events...hehe.

3) I knew it was going to come up eventually, and when I saw the two of them drinking, I figured it was pretty soon. Although, I never expected Gold to be so upset about being in his arms. XD The entire thing about it was realistic...almost a little to much? ;P

4) Aw, crap. I have to work on my room a little. I'll be back shortly.

5) A wonderful pull together your sewing along there with the tattoo. Now that you have completed, for the most part, the image of Gold's history, all that's left is how messed up the procedure of completion of plot will be. Muahaha. Wonderful plot. I like how the main plot is behind a thin curtain.

Reading back #5 to myself, I almost understand what I said, so if you don't, then I have no problem with Jigen practicing aim on me. XD

6) The Christmas thing was perfect. Predictable, yet surprising, heart warming and intriguing. Just how Christmas stories should be. The details on emotions and expressions could always be deeper and thicker, but you did very well with it.

7) This freakin' curtain is blowing ALL OVER ME. GAH.

8)As I said before, I have my own Fan-Fiction of your Fan-Fiction forming all over the place. O.o Tis creepy? Or comforting?

9) The character development, over all, is phenomenal. (Man, that took forever to spell.) The different viewpoints on the story take is a vonderful idea for this story and all it's crazy turns. I like how you can get 'I' and 'They' to refer to the same person without loosing me. You are streaming together past and present into areal idealistic clan formation from several broken puzzle sets. It works wonders for the story itself.

10) I'm glad I started reading this. It makes me want to get back to my own writing, in which I now realize needs drastic help. I thank you kindly.

~Kori

Biggs. Is that short for 4 something? 'Cause if it is, I believe that's another person I have a chance of knowing- not to mention, another guy who you can play accents with...But then again he might be someone else too...

Anyways, I'm making this last review before I head off to school to be murdered before the weekend. Won't be able to do as much reading as I did last night- I'll be with VampiradeNebula (she's on my Sheez friends list, you can check her out.)

Anyways, after a long search, I finally found a story I can't help but rad. You've got me addicted, Gold. You know how hard that is?

~Kori

Of. All. Random. People. I. Actually. Recognize. Why. Kim. Possible?

Well, there you have it, Gold. A person I recognize right away. XD See? Not that deprived.

OH- I finally got ur response to my *first* review from yesterday, because I've been so busy readin' I forgot about that kind of thing. XD

Puppet- Gold Demona is *your* puppet. She's that little girl who does what you want to in your story. If you have a friend written in, that's their puppet. Now, this is terminology that I kind of came up with on the spare of the moment, I guess, but it certainly fits. Well, in my perspective anyways.

~Kori

O.O

That was...*so* beautiful. Wonderful. Details were superb. ^^ Beak, tobacco, and yet you can't get enough...yah yah. Love it. Well okay, for me, it was chapped w/ overnight accumalative, but seam difference. XD

Vonderful chaptah dahlin'. It's makes meh hart glahd to read ah storie like'a a'this one.

Sry, that was really tempting. XD