Brilliant story. I loved it. The ending was sad but still extremely

Great story, but such a sad ending ...

Oh my, this story was absolutely amazing. That's really all I have to say, as there is no criticism to be given. Now I'm off to see if you have any other stories to read.

Happy Writing.

Lolayola

I loved the story! It was all really well written and had great descriptions. You had a few plot twists that I totally didn't see coming and they were great! As sad as the ending was it ends the story nicely.

I liked your story. Its nice.

Loved this story couldn't stop reading it. Keep up the good work

The Spotter

wow, brilliant story.

very suprising and fitting ending.

I love your writing already.

Favorite line so far: And as one of the ultimate clichés goes, then it all went black.

You made me cry with this ending. Though I enjoyed reading it, I just get sappy with bad endings.

that was rele good. the only thing i would disagree with u on is the lack of protection on hogwarts. it shouldn't have been THAT weak. also other magical installations shouldn't have been so badly protected. but thats in my opinion. i do recognize that wizards weren't expecting deep-strike rockets to bombard their location either. i enjoyed this alot tho. good job.

I feel absolutely horrible.

You killed him. I can't believe you killed him, and yet, I can't see any other way for you to end it so well, and I hate myself for thinking that!

Interesting twist on the story.

I loved your story ... infact it's all your fault i've not prepared for my seminar tomorrow ... well, later today actually :p

The bit with the inhibiting chemicals was a bit x-men: the last stand if you know what i mean. it was the announcemnet that made it click, and then i cudnt shake the association

Not too sure about the ending though ... I mean, I liked what you decided should happen to each of the characters, but the last bit itself wasn't long enough for my liking! I wanted more dammit! Lol!

Don't get me wrong, really liked it though! Very well done!

i loved the whole story of yours except for the end... can't say i hate it but didn't think it was as great as the whole story was...

thanks a lot for sharing this and completing it!

I loved this! The plot was original and the flow and grammar was well done. I was surprised by the memory charm though, you really made me think that harry had gone into the future. I guess the idea that this was as ridiculous and that Harry was "arrogant to think so" as Polanar said had to do with the fact that we have so many time fics on this site. That worked to your advantage. As for the ending, I was a bit disappointed since I wanted to have all of my questions answered but I guess this is better. Leave the readers thinking and not make the ending cliche and happy-ever-after. I can't wait for you next piece, best of luck!

Dreamcloud99

Amazing. I love the background story with Helga Hufflepuff and the backup plan. And good gods, of course Harry would have to be the stubborn one, wanting to sacrifice himself and all that.

On the whole, this story definitely hits the originality hardcore. I love it for that. One of the few I can honestly say that the plot hasn't been done to death - though, I do admit, I don't tend to complain as long as a story is well-written.

By the by, this one flowed extremely well and not once did I cringe over structure or plot or anything. Bravo, my friend, and I'm looking forward to your new piece... thanks so much for sharing!