 Claire M C 2006-04-05 . chapter 1Hi, I actually saved this on my computer the other night to read, which is why I didn't review it at the time, sorry:) Anyway, I was really impressed with this. I was a bit dubious at when I first saw it because I wasnt' sure how a crossover between the two shows would work, but I absolutely loved this! I like the fact that it takes place after Buffy finished, and I adored Xander in this. I thought he was very "in" character. I also liked your explanation for Chloe's awkward movements, and her self consciousness. Although I thought at the end maybe you were going for a Xander/Chloe thing, I'm glad to hear your sequel will be Chloe/Jack. I can't wait to read about his reaction when he finds out she's a slayer Lol! |
 scoob2222 2006-04-04 . chapter 1Hey, read on the J/C list that you were looking for reviews and was so excited to see this story. I don't know how I missed it when you posted. Anyway, I really liked it. The idea of Chloe as a slayer. Loved the comparison the Cordy--never really thought if it that way, but it's so true. I'd defintely read a sequel. Would love to see Chloe and Jack fighting side by side. Or any sort of interaction between Jack and Spike.= Hope you write sequel. |