good chapter, that was a nioce ending

this is a good story so far, your english is really good just a few mistakes here and there plz update soon

hey update this!
It's good!
I really like it.
Are there any pairings?

Thanks for putting up the new chapter, I really was wanting to read it. Good job and keep writing. See ya

Mia

Cool story, I'm enjoying it a lot. But I've told you that before. Lets see how it turns... Up date soon.

Mia

PS: yeah, Max's mum is named Judy

To Goodbye-for-now, I really don't know how this story gonna look like and haw long it wold be.

Hi! I love Kai torture! Yay! Your English isn't THAT bad, oh sure there are a few mistakes, but we all make them! (Trust me. If you hadn't said that English wasn't your first language, I might have just thought that they were just typos.) Good job!

I think this is a great story! I always enjoy seeing charactes and their hidden depths from other people's point of view. Kai's character is very well shown and I'd have no trouble at all believing every word you have said about him. Very well done!

its really good keep updating and maxs mum name is judy

i feel bad for poor Kai

Hello, Izolda! I think you story is rather good but there are some spelling mistakes for e.g. in second chapter you wrote " your are bad injured". BTW, Max mum name is Judy. I 'd like to know, how many chapter are you planning to write?

Good job for your first fic! Continue, I want to see how Kai reacts to how his team cares for him. By the way, watch you verb tenses. They shift back and forth from present to past.

max mum is called judy, anyway keep updating this is really good.

keep updating

im so SAD
cos
that episode is so SAD
BUT
KAI is still the BEST
ever