 loser in the gutter 2009-07-23 . chapter 4o!! soo...im totally in love with this story.. i cant WAIT for more!! e! |
 chaos queen0703 2009-03-07 . chapter 4omg.. your story is really good,
write more!!
i will pay you... i have a gum rapper, a broken phone, and REALLY over due homework!
PLEASE update soon! |
 buffyandspike-4ever 2008-03-31 . chapter 4Love it, please update again. I can't wait to see what Havoc's got on Roy and what Roy is gonna do about Ed! |
 Hagane Kai 2008-03-20 . chapter 4gimme the cookie...
I love your story, but please! UPDATE! I need more... |
 VermilionValentine 2008-02-15 . chapter 4updates soon please im hooked |
 pandafoot105 2007-11-22 . chapter 4PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! |
 Shadow Artist 2007-08-28 . chapter 4Please update this! It's fabulous!
- Shadow |
 ehxhfdl14 2007-08-07 . chapter 4God, this story is awesome! But did you quit on this? You left the story hanging right at a cliffy, too... |
 GreedxEd 2007-08-03 . chapter 3are you still working on this? i really love it and hope that it will be updated eventaully. |
 alaine 2007-08-03 . chapter 4 cant wait for your next update i would love to know roy's embarassing past and how he would convince him to join the military |
 Edward 2007-07-16 . chapter 4 MORE!
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Please? |
 StarMimi 2007-05-25 . chapter 4;_; Is your story dead? I really hope that it continues, cause I have enjoyed it so far. |
 aden983 2007-03-21 . chapter 4HAY! HOEBAG! WHY HAVENT YOU UPDATED IN LIKE FOREVER?! I REALIZE THAT YOU ARE GOING TO COLLEGE AND STUFF BUT WHAT THE HELL? anyways now that i bitched you out i love you ^_^ |
 foxy crimefighta 2007-03-11 . chapter 4I love this story so far, k`
The kiss, on both, parts, was an excellent touch.
Hope you update soon! |
 royfan 2007-01-08 . chapter 4 gah! you must continue this! this is simply awesome! i want to know all about roy's past! and what he'll do! please write! |