How very, very dark - to walk the earth like a living hell, without any redemption or peace possible. I can't really imagine a worse fate. You write it very well, too.

I loved this. I don't usually like stories with Snape in them, but this was wonderful.

I loved it!

So sad, so apropos. It's a shame that most of your other pieces are not in the HP fandom. Good job- you write beautifully. I still have the chills.

Very well written, I enjoyed it emensely even thought it was very melancholy!
cya
DK

This is very good. I wish I was into your other fandoms.

The way you wove these words is beautiful; they shine fiercely.

That was beautiful.
Sad, depressing, but beautiful.
Have you submitted this to Ashwinder?

Moonlit River

Very nicely done. I liked the rhythm and the atmosphere. Not sentamental. Good, memorable piece.

A well structured piece, with a strong rhythmic sense / pattern. I thought it set out what kept them together very well and articulated their isolation.

Holy crap...that's freakin beautiful. I know, a subject that dark, be beautiful? But wtf, it was poetry. The whole story read like poetry. Some of my favorite parts are, "...her starry crown burning to ashes on reentry from orbit." and "...they follow each other's scars like roadmaps", and the best one is "Two in comas for a week, they woke on the same day, gasping to consciousness at the same time, while great, sap tears rolled down the trunk of the third." Gredatkejhifjikinivon, thats gorgeous.

Btw, the Weasley's home is the 'Burrow', not 'Burren'. Thought you'd want to know.

Wow...
This is really really well written. I love this. It's so sad yet so..so amazing at the same time. Its really beautiful.
You're a great writer.
Are you gonna write anymore things?

um okay... i don't really understand this, but it's okay i guess