 Alani 2007-03-10 . chapter 22"Now Mrs Davenport was a fantastic cook (oh, Pippa tried, she really did; but, like painting, cooking wasn’t Pippa’s strong point, though everyone loved to hear her telling of her mishaps in the kitchen and cried with laughter as they ate, glad that Tom had rescued yet another almost ruined dinner) and Lynn’s brothers and sisters immediately held out plates they’d scraped clean while poor Lynn burst into tears and exclaimed, “But I haven’t had firsts yet!”
I loved this bit. Poor Lynne. But the thing with the Lynne character, she had a family who loved her. Unlike Sally, Steven, Carly and Frank.
A really good chapter. This is getting to be a book!
Alani. |
 Alani 2007-02-05 . chapter 21A good chapter...I haven't reviewed in awhile. Oops. |
 Alani 2006-11-07 . chapter 17Another good chapter...sorry for not reviewing in awhile. *hangs head in shame* but I've noticed this fic is over at bttb. I might leave reviews there instead. |
 Donna Turner 2006-09-26 . chapter 1 Sally Rocks |
 Alani 2006-09-25 . chapter 14Wow, what an interesting chapter...an insight into Pippa's past! Very clever. |
 anonymous 2006-09-18 . chapter 13 I didnt watch the early years either, but, i've seen the pilot, which was a bonus feature on the Home & away romances dvd. in The beginning, before th fletchers move to summer bay, tom loses his job. Steven says he'll go back to the home if they want him to because hes only been with them a few weeks. Then pippa explaains the photo on the mantle piece means youre part of the family concept, which was reintroduced last year when Ric, and then Cassie, moved in with sally |
 anonymous 2006-09-15 . chapter 11 this story is really good. one thing though, i'm pretty sure steven moved in with the fletchers after lynn and sally. |
 I love music 2006-08-21 . chapter 9 Aargh, this is driving me crazy now! For anyone following, that's meant to read "The latest chapter can be found on BacktotheBay." |
 I love music 2006-08-21 . chapter 10I've tried and tried to post Chapter 11 on here today but for some reason it won't let me. For anyone following,the latest chapter can be found on |
 Alani 2006-07-11 . chapter 8For a minute there I thought Colleen was packing lunch for a five year old Lancey not a 20 year old!
Little Sal plans to run away? I hope not.
Loving this fic and seeing the return on some of the early years characters. |
 Alani 2006-06-30 . chapter 7Another excellent chapter. Sally was actually a troubled child. |
 Cool-cat3 2006-06-14 . chapter 6Please add more chapters! This is a brilliant story! |
 catchastar 2006-06-11 . chapter 6I can't believe i hadn't stumbled upon this fic sooner. It's great. I love how you've added Kane and Scott to the story. I'd love to see some Lance/Sally scenes hehehe.
Look forward to reading more.
xx Catchastar |
 Alani 2006-06-11 . chapter 6Sally wouldn't burn Steven...would she?? Eagerly awaiting the next chapter... |
 Alani 2006-05-30 . chapter 5I always wondered what Milko looked like.
A great chapter. This fic is really intriuging(sp?) me. And you are a really good writer. Have you written anything else than fan fiction? Just wondering!
Looking forward to the next chapter. I've put you on my list of fave authors.
Alani |