Once again, very cute. I need to come up with a better word...

i hope that if though you say it complete you will write more.

I enjoyed it. Wish we'd gotten something more personal like that on the show.

Great story. was this a one-shot? If not i hope for an update

Love it! I also love J/C and am annoyed that they're trying to keep the Jack/Audrey relationship alive.

Great story so far!

I love you!! ok maybe love is a bit strong, but i really like you!

i thought i was only crazy person on this planet that loved them together

you did a great job writing

and i was alreadly thinking of doing one because i thought no one else would have, but now i am definitly going to do it!

please write more about them

Love it! Great little moment between the two of them. Love Chloe yelling at everyone to get back to work and the Buchanan shoulder grab--Chloe and Buchanan are like father/daughter adorable. If only we got this on the show.

Nice little insert. I love Jack and Chloe's relationship too. There's such an implicit trust there, and I think you've done a good job capturing it.