 Anonymous 2009-01-28 . chapter 7 Damn. That's pretty damn cool. I think that's the first time anyone's made konoha into a bloodthirsty satanic cult. For some reason, it reminds me of a movie, but i don't remember what its name was. Either way, good job. |
 greyspell 2008-05-21 . chapter 7Holy S**t, and i hope that didn't insult u! That was awesome! Wow! The end was a bit confusing, and I'm glad Hinata survived, but how? what happened? Great job though! |
 Ikasury 2007-12-18 . chapter 7that... was... PSYCHOTIC!! but bloody ** awesome ^.^ quite an interesting concept, i really do like the end though, but i wonder what happened to sakura, shikamaru, and the invalid neji? but this means the rest of konoha is dead, well after that whole cult-like display, yay if they are, though its odd to think of tsunade as a cultist leader, or being that deranged... but i wonder what happened to shizune, she split from there, so wouldn't her descendants be 'infected' by the weird-** microbes spoken of by naruto and hinta's kid, who knows maybe its his moms 'timidness' that was the defect that allowed him to be sane...
all i know is that was ** trippy *thumbs-up* you ** rock!!
Till next *salute-waves* Sayounara, Goatman!!
-Ikasury |
 ShiningYrael 2007-07-20 . chapter 7Well... the last ending REALLY needs some clarification... It was a great fic... but...
Frankly, that ending sucked. I mean, it definitely left me wanting more... but... not in a positive way.
So... it was a really good ending, but, well, it's basically a ** tease. And I ** HATE blue balls. |
 ShiningYrael 2007-07-20 . chapter 4All of my previous doubts have been erased. This is fantastic. THIS is what I want to read. I hate that happy go lucky **.
You are one damn good writer. You're really shoving emotions down my throat, tension growing and stretching and pulsing with life at every twist. I love this. |
 ShiningYrael 2007-07-20 . chapter 1Uh... interesting concept, to say the least. I'll not not go off on a big OOC rant, or anything, and just accept it as you've written it.
Overall, very well written, and entertaining. |
 karma13 2007-07-19 . chapter 7 i loved the story but the end was...pretty crapy...sorry. |
 causeiambetta 2007-07-19 . chapter 7very creative piece for an ending. Again, very high concept story and ending. lots of creative gambles that worked. great job! |
 causeiambetta 2007-07-19 . chapter 5very very cold and dark vision of events. well written and described. the dictator theme is really working now |
 causeiambetta 2007-07-19 . chapter 4the story is very alternative universe but a different, fresh one at that. i could see alot of your theories about the history and make up of the villages and demons too. its very interesting to read |
 causeiambetta 2007-07-19 . chapter 3another solid chapter. this is the tensest one of them all. suspense is very well done |
 causeiambetta 2007-07-19 . chapter 2the darkness continues. wow. very cool to read |
 causeiambetta 2007-07-19 . chapter 1very dark vision of events. things really got out of hand quickly. tsunade turning on naruto that quickly? gaara killing his village after having made his change? wow |
 Lyndal 2007-07-04 . chapter 7Excellent storyline! I like how dark you made characters such as Tsunade, and how you captured the savagery that a village such as Konoha can have. Well done! |
 kankuro-sama 2007-07-02 . chapter 1great first chapter. the writing tone is well maintained. it's good that you didnt screw it up with fluff in the first chapter. |