i like most of the story so far. i want to know what happens next!

well please do something, i think you should do a combo of like everything, but i like complicated things, sorry.

well its been a while, but i LOVE the story, and hate to see that its been this long, but am still hoping to see something.

oh well, LOVE it, and did i mention, LOVE it?

well i think you have so many options and should do w/e you feel like with it, it is your story afterall,

well later

i just read all your story its mindblowing and i want more passionate scenes, who said you aint good at them.

hehe, this story is soo good. A little unlike the characters but still awesome!

That was sweet.

Both, update soon. lol. I just finished this haha. Umm, if you need any help or anything with this just let me know kay :)

Faith

umm... most deff the lemon! well... you know me, i'm anxious for her gift to, but i really really want the lemon...you cant just end a sexy scene like that! I can't let my imagination do ALL the work...and i'm sure you'll be great with the passionate scenes...TRY PLEASE! lol thanks!

-ilovejoe15

lemon it! i love this fic so far!

Very good story! I really like it so far, and I was hoping the next chapter could be on Bella's gist and an explanation? Please!

Anywho, fantastic job, and i look forward to more when you get the chance!

Kohana

dang, i was hoping it was completed now i have to wait (sighing with inner tormoil) Bella seems less confident to me but the same... you did sometihng awesome when you wrote she considered herself part ugly becus its so in charater. please update soon i love this story!

Well, me being...well...me, I would like a lomon. Whatever you decide to do will probably be great. Explaining her gift would probably be helpful to the story. So, if you want to do that, that would be good. Just go with what is flowing through your brain right now and post it, and we'll all tell you what we think.

Em Cullen

Amazing! Update soon!

Why did the chapters get steadily shorter? Just curious...

I really really like this story so far. I can't tell you to write a lemon or not, that's up to everyone else. Keep up the good work!

I think some clarification of her gift is needed, some explination, and maybe even some experimentation with it. I think you should explain why Alexander is there in the first place- have you?- and perhaps a shopping excursion so Bella can have clothes for her new body, you're really good at the exuberant shopping scenes- throw in some humor as always, and everyone will love it!(you can use shopping as an excuse for Alice to help brighten the mood after everything that just happened.) Hopefully this helped!

Very interesting. I really want to know what her gift is! An explanation would be nice though too. Both then. Please update soon!