that is so sweet!

short but refreshing. haha! go go go kakashixrin! I hope you do more of them! they're so adorable! haha!

that one nearly got me. it was sweet, melancholy and very very good.

adorable. :)

you captured their feelings for each other perfectly~

I got chills reading this. CHILLS. Like, couldn't stop chills. Amazing imagery. Your command of physiological description warrants praise.

goregous. simply, beautifully goregous. Amazing imagery, deliciously poetic, paradox metaphoric analogy. I adored this!

*is speechless*
This is such a beautiful story, so poignant and bittersweet and...*wibbles*

Oh, I really like this! :3 I don't know Rin and Obito that well, because I don't read the manga, but still, i really like this.

Brilliant. It all flowed so nicely and I almost cried. I love how wrote Rin and the ending...oh god, I loved this ending becuase , well, you can call it a chocolate feeling, except only with a tint of fruit in it.
Overall, I love your Kakashi Gaiden fics(as in stories that take place before Team 7)
PS.I hope you understand the fruit and chocolate thing, because I seriouse doubt i can understand my this rewieve completely.

Aw...Rin/Obito/Kakashi/Yondaime stories are always kind of depressing. :(

In the days that follow after, things come to pass that none of them could have imagined. Blood-red eyes and apple-red blood, the chocolate of Kakashi's dark gaze and the taste of their tears are all fixed forever in Rin's memory; and she realizes that in some way, though they set out on different paths, her two flavors reach for the same end. And she wonders, then, if they ever knew.

I LOVED that part! It was so great! Please continue! This is one of the BEST drabbles I ever read!

I love the bittersweet-ness (is that a word? o.o) of this fic. I like the idea of Kakashi and Rin exchanging fruit and Obito giving her chocolate. Just goes to show how different her two boys are.

Thank you for the best description of a piece of fruit I've ever read in my life. Haha.

BAH!!That's so sad and sweet at the same time! I love this group :)

*dies from all the sweetness*

KakashixRin is my fave het pairing and this, this is just beautiful :).

Dammit, don't make me cry!

So, so sad... why am I so friggin emotional...

I was skimming through your archive (I was in the process of checking out Klayter McCabe's favorite author list), and couldn't help but notice that you have a rediculous number of Naruto oneshots. I picked this one mostly because it was the first one I came across with less than 10 words, and I've now decided that I'll have to read every fic, regardless of length.

I love it because it's not angst, but it feels like it is and is just trying to keep you happy, but doesn't realize that you will cry anyway because you know why it's just so sad.

(Damn, that made no sense.)

(Well, I mean, it makes sense to me, but more than likely it won't make sense to you.)

(Chi is like that sometimes.)

Seeing as she can't seem to write ANYTHING but rediculously short Naruto drabble at the moment, all fairly weird, all under 800 words, she thinks her archive will end up looking like yours, only the stories will all be shorter and more than likely much worse.

(Chi is trying to improve her drabble. Thus far with minimal results.)

Chi is ranting AGAIN, so she's going to cut off the review before she fills up six pages. And she will end by saying: Excellent work. Please, please keep writing; dewa mata.