Omg, so this is pretty much the best fanfic ever! haha good job on it so far rachel, I like how he was like "And a Hot Topic" but I mean come on, how about an Abercrombie and Fitch, American Eagle, Aeropostale, Pacsun, Hollister, all the good stores! Hehe, well anyways, here is your review!

Your bestest friend,

Mike

At least this one is meant to be funny.

Favorites, much?

So great i pissed my fucking pants laughing so hard, at least you know how to spell.