 aya143 2007-04-29 . chapter 1im not sure when and how often you read your reviews so i have to say the same thing in every piece that i read by you...amazing work, my friend. you have a real talent for writing and believe me it shows! you make the reader see a whole new side to a character, like this one with miroku. many, myself included, only see him as the perverted monk who has his kind moments, but you showed what could and possibly be going through his head. great job! |
 peaches 2006-04-02 . chapter 1 Beautifully bittersweet story. I was a little confused at the begining, though, it seemed liek the story was going to be in third person and then suddenly it's Miroku. But other than that, it was quite nicely written. Keep up the good work! |