amusing...simply amusing...hehehe...and the last part brought a smile to my lips...

yeah, something bit ed alright...probably a bug?
a *love* bug? XD

nice story! i liked it a lot! ^^

I just recently started getting into this pairing and let me start off me by saying, THANK YOU. You are extremely talented and I enjoyed every bit of this story.

It's sweet, funny, and just all around amazing. The ending wasn't too bad either ;D
But anyway, great job on this!

giggles heehee this is realy cute not alot of errors ...ling proposed ...im way behind oh well mabe this winter break ill catch up toodles

The end was so cute. I love Al :3

Aw that was so CUTE

Infact i wrote one awfly similar to that but i decided not to post it (didnt know how to finnish it)

kikki x

wow...an edxwin that is IN character!! you portrayed them really well, and the ending was hilarious!!

That was a great one-shot. The characters were portrayed very well, making it very enjoyable to read. Not too mushy or overdone. Great job!

that was so sweet and funny. and it was well writen. i loveded it.

haHA! BRILLIANT! I love this - start to finish just the right amount of everything!

Brilliant fic! Really enjoyed it alot! You definitely did a great job keeping the two of them so expertly in character and I really felt it was something that could (and hopefully does!) happen, lol.

hahahah, this is too cute. I love how you worked in the reference to Ling and his proposals. *grin*

=] How amusing. The whole story was done beautifully and I have to compliment on how you added in Ed's big jealousy to help move things. Though you might need to add in a A/N to say that Ed did start contacting Winry more after the basement incident. =]

Just a suggestion. Well done~

WOAH! Loved the ending part... hahah! I couldn't stop laughing... :D

Heh, I liked it. The plot was very different and original - froom what I've read, anyways.

The best EdWinry I have read to date. You have real talent and both of them were in perfect character! Great job!