This was really funny and worth reading!

Great job!

That was really and a great idea! Good job :)

XDDDDD

Well they definitely made love into a verb didn't they. The ending still cracks me up. "I SAID NEVER MIND IT."

Haha.

This needs a sequel involving a pregnant winry XD

Haha hilarious!

Loved it! Great!

You kept Ed and everyone else in character, while still being able to

have romance in it! Not many people can do that ya know

5/5*

Hehe, this story was both funny and super cute! Keep your good work up!

amusing...simply amusing...hehehe...and the last part brought a smile to my lips...

yeah, something bit ed alright...probably a bug?

a *love* bug? XD

nice story! i liked it a lot!

I just recently started getting into this pairing and let me start off me by saying, THANK YOU. You are extremely talented and I enjoyed every bit of this story.

It's sweet, funny, and just all around amazing. The ending wasn't too bad either ;D

But anyway, great job on this!

giggles heehee this is realy cute not alot of errors ...ling proposed ...im way behind oh well mabe this winter break ill catch up toodles

The end was so cute. I love Al :3

Aw that was so CUTE

Infact i wrote one awfly similar to that but i decided not to post it (didnt know how to finnish it)

kikki x

wow...an edxwin that is IN character! you portrayed them really well, and the ending was hilarious!

That was a great one-shot. The characters were portrayed very well, making it very enjoyable to read. Not too mushy or overdone. Great job!

that was so sweet and funny. and it was well writen. i loveded it.

haHA! BRILLIANT! I love this - start to finish just the right amount of everything!

Brilliant fic! Really enjoyed it alot! You definitely did a great job keeping the two of them so expertly in character and I really felt it was something that could (and hopefully does!) happen, lol.