Ok i havn't finishd reading this chapter because i had to stop and say: FOR GOD SAKES LEARN TO PUNCTUATE! And 2 speakers cannot speak on the same line! Also, PLEASE say who is saying what, at times i had to guess who said this or that.

Otherwise, story seems great so far, not gonna let the punctuation put me off reading this :)

oh my god its over please please PLEASE! make a sequil!

Very cute. nice work.

As to what you said on the first page, you shouldn't worry about it being too fluffy. People like fluff. They love it. I love it. Great story. :)

aw

that was very sweet =)

a very cute romance. I hope U do a sequel. CHA!

Nice attempt at a K+ fic

Love this story!

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It´s my little shrine x] . Kisses!

Gigi

This is an incredible story (it is done, right?). If you don't like it, then take a look at yout so-called 'competition'. Anyway, great plot and great drama. My only complaint is that it was a tad too fast-paced.

that was a cute story!

~* firehottie *~

Aww...kawaii ending! Keep up the good work, kay? Later!

Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next story you write (update soon Plz)

I loved this fic it was beautiful! And I'm glad Stasi and Ash are only friends:) AAML 4 EVER!

Lovely! ^_^