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davethedark 2007-11-26 . chapter 2
update soon...
Major Hinata Fan 2007-09-16 . chapter 2
Pretty cool story so far, looks like it could have gone somewhere. But seeing as you've stopped writing it, I'm going to guess you lost interest in writing it.
EvilNaruto15 2007-03-15 . chapter 2
yay great job! poor Anko poor Naruto

i vote for Hinata Huuyga
EvilNaruto15 2007-03-15 . chapter 1
great job
Meggi of Mysteri OusStranger 2007-01-03 . chapter 2
YAYA! This is great! I love it! Update when you get the chance!
Krow Blood 2006-10-23 . chapter 2
I would defintly like a NarutoXTemari

This story is cool, Continue it
Wolf among sheep 2006-10-13 . chapter 2
Great story please update when you get the time.8/10 femaleHaku.
robflame 2006-08-05 . chapter 2
well the tory is great. i go wit narutemari since you wont be having naruanko...kinda werid wit the immortal thing but whateve. anyway i go with naruto and temari cause naruhina and narusaku are way over used. and i just dont seem to see a good narukurenai. or tenten and naruto...nah temari and naruto!
Karuma Kinsei 2006-08-02 . chapter 2
Good so far, vote NaruxHina. Update soon
kyo 2006-05-29 . chapter 2
the fic is aw-some!...oh yeah!i'd have to go with NaruSaku
Monkeymandb 2006-05-27 . chapter 1
please no haru/hina or naru/saku those are so old. i mean ive seen at least 180 - 190 naru/hina and naru/saku so since anko is narutos mom and her best friend is kurenai you could make that pairing or even ayame the ramen girl or fem haku of ten-ten though i dont like that one its better than the firs two and dont even get me started on ino cause all i can say is hell no.
Biolightning 2006-05-19 . chapter 2
THIS STORY ROCKS! please update soon i love the whole background story and i never really did notice the scare on Gamabunta eye lol!
Silverscale 2006-04-27 . chapter 2
Awesome story, I think I will place my vote on Kurenai. Hm... no better yet, I vote for NarutoxHarem, if that's possible, if not then I will just pick Kurenai.
TB 2006-04-24 . chapter 2
I really like how this is going so far but i can't help but feel bad for anko i will that this story updates soon i just hate to wait
tb 2006-04-23 . chapter 1
please do not do a hina and naruto paring their are so many of them that it just gets sicking anyone else but those 2 please do update soon
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