I can never get enough of U.R.T.V. brotherly banter. Your portrayal of Gaignun’s playfulness was particularly enjoyable for me. In spite of the younger brother’s collectiveness, Gaignun always crossed me as having a subtly playful side, especially when it comes to teasing Jr.’s relationships (similarly to when Nigredo teases Rubedo about Sakura). The back-and-forth nature of Jr. and Gaignun’s chat was well-written, and style-wise, I liked how the brothers alternated between spoken/telepathic words (something U.R.T.V.s could probably do). The suggestive humor was a surefire way for me to smirk and snicker happily. _ Utterly comical, and utterly enjoyable one-shot!

this was... disturbing, to say the least... but also funny (once you get past the fact that they are talking about a GUY)

Damn, I really liked this one, even though I'm not exactly a Jr/Allen fan (coming to think of it, not being a fan didn't stop me from reading and enjoying all your J/A stories earlier). A light-hearted verbal match between these two brothers is not something you can see everyday in this fandom, that's why I appreciate it so much. Well done. The balance between dialogue and description was okay (for a vignette like this, anyway), and I found the whole thing interesting and very amusing. Thanks for sharing!

Aw, cute brotherly moment...