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amsley
2006-09-03
ch 11,
abuselove the fluff. love the fluff. love the fluff.
Noa-Pearl
2006-08-17
ch 11,
abuseI loved this story! It was so good to read, it's great.
prin69
2006-06-01
ch 1,
abuselol
Audacious
2006-05-14
ch 11,
abuseOH HOW CAN YOU END IT THERE!!?!?? LOL no dirt? wonderful story, i'm looking forward to see what else you come up with! -audacious
GraciePie
2006-05-12
ch 11,
abuseMan, great work! Favorites List starting...now.
ladybrin
2006-05-12
ch 11,
abusewell thanks for a great story and a good read- i have enjoyed it- can't wait til you start another one- teehee
Leatah
2006-05-08
ch 11,
abuseSo god...really enjoyed this story...look forward to reading more...Thanks
perfectcrime
2006-05-08
ch 11,
abuseA little short, but a very good last chapter. Thx for writing this it's awsome.
mcabello
2006-05-08
ch 11,
abuseGood chapter. Write more soon.
blucougar57
2006-05-08
ch 11,
abuseOh, please please please write a short epilogue. I admit I'm a sadist, but I want to read Leo's reaction when he realises he's lost out to Bobby.

Otherwise, this has been such a great story.
Caia
2006-05-08
ch 11,
abuseI absolutely loved this chapter, it was great!
As much as I would have liked to 'see what happens' I loved the ending...
Thanks for writing.
InfinityStar
2006-05-08
ch 11,
abuseThat was a great story! You did an awesome job and I agree with your decision to end it where you did. Everything was resolved and there really doesn't seem to be anyplace left to go. Great job!
The Confused One
2006-05-08
ch 11,
abuseYAY! I love it. It's a perfect ending. :) I'm going to miss updates of this story. LOL
rainy angellz
2006-05-08
ch 11,
abuseI thought this part was a perfect ending. LOL, revealing that they both staked claims on one another is a great ending, and admitting that they both did it made it even better. It's like they should pee around each other to stake their claim like in animals do. xP

Great job!
Secret Phoenix 679
2006-05-08
ch 11,
abuseAs much as i am sad to see this end...that was excellent!! This story was great!! I hope you have some more ideas to put to paper soon!! :D
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