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| TheBeautyOfTheGrave 2008-05-05 ch 1,  | abuseTis good, I like it. I've often thought the same things Justin's thinking, THOUGH I KNOW THEIR LOVE IS REAL! *sighs and dreams...* |
| Dragon Pants 2007-11-25 ch 1, | abuseYour perspective is really interesting, and I think that it could be a good fic. But you switch point of views to a third person close to a second person, and thats really annoying. If you focus more on writing style I think it'll make your fic really shine. |
| IzzBella91 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. Really did well with getting into Justin's head. God, I loved his character, I wish he was still on the show. Hell, I wish Andrew still had a character on the show. He was the only reason I watched and now his char. is pretty much kaput. Awesome fic. |
| righty 2007-07-05 ch 1, anon. | abusewell done! write more, if you still here! please, you do have potential! |
| lalla 2006-09-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh you should write more to this story because it rocks! ah i wonder whats going to happen next. *head spinning* ^-^! |
| im36degrees 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abusei too am an avid supporter of the "free justin!" cause. |
| aspirer 2006-05-06 ch 1, | abuseoh dear, poor justin...on the other hand, i love these two...well done |
| FireKai 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abuseI liked your story. Write more fics about DH. |
| smithyfan 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abuseWell done this is a really good fic. You have looked into Justins head well. A good fic about what happened behind the closed door..! well done you should really write more DH stuff keep up the good work x |
| ForbiddenSecrets 2006-04-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood job, I really enjoed thay^-^ |
| xalex 2006-04-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a really good fic and i totally think you got inside justins head. you should def continue it throughtout series2!! 1 thing tho u swaaped from you to him alot- bit confusing but thats ma only crit!! wel dun x |