 Lai Tasha 2006-06-23 . chapter 8Awsome, I can't really be bothered buying that game so the questions must go unanswered.
And so ends another awe inspiring tale by soulguard.
illic ero alius, there will be others
~Lai Tasha~ |
 Dante-Raven 2006-06-18 . chapter 7Good job--I had a feeling it was the rise of Nihilus. Either way, I am looking forward to reading the finale of this story. I can only imagine what other fics you've got in mind and how this will end in a bang. |
 a lazy Lai Tasha 2006-06-17 . chapter 7 Awsome. Can't wait for the last chapter. |
 Lai Tasha 2006-06-13 . chapter 6 Awsomeness. Cant wait till it finishes. |
 TheJesus 2006-05-21 . chapter 5I've submitted reviews to this story prior to this one, and my verdict remains the same: This is probably one of the best fanfics I have ever read. The story is extremly interesting, and every ending leaves me waiting and hoping for more. Not only plot development, but character development too (which is very impressive, since all of these characters are origional). Long chapters leave me satisfied, and the writing style is excellent. Keep it comming man, I'm starting to get addicted. |
 Lai Tasha 2006-05-18 . chapter 5 Good, very good. |
 Dante-Raven 2006-05-17 . chapter 5Well, I've been reading this to pass the time and I've got to say, this has intrigued me. Firstly, the idea of a Tarentatek's abilities in the Force has never really been capitalized, so I commend you for it. I see a few spelling mistakes here and there, but what I notice mostly is that you tend to confuse a few of the words with what they sound like, for example: "seize/cease, their/there/they're, etc." It's a common mistake, but I figure you'll probably make adjustments to these chapters later on. I've been enjoying this fic and one thing I find surprising is possibly the unsuspecting betrayal that might come, though I have to admit, you could always throw us in for a loop. You tend to make a lot of twists that are unexpected, so I am really looking forward to this in the long run. Keep it up. |
 TheJesus 2006-05-04 . chapter 4 Aye. Another hole in the force maybe? Interesting, yet possibly repetative. I've commented before, but I forget what I said (pitty some plants have a terrible effect on the memory). Either way, I love the story. Well written and filled with action, but I hoping to get to the true plot of the story soon. Its good, every chapter has left me with questions. Write on, buddy. I see a lot of potential in this one. |
 Lai Tasha 2006-05-03 . chapter 4Coolies.
I think that sums up your excellence in writing. |
 cody 2006-05-03 . chapter 3 sweet jesus man. this is one of the best stories I've ever read, esspecial one of the best star wars stories. please for the love of god keep writing! |
 TheJesus 2006-04-30 . chapter 3 Very interesting so far. I really loved the KotOR seris, and im enjoying this story as well. I hope to see more. |
 dldaddy 2006-04-27 . chapter 3A fun read to be sure. Thanks for breaking me out from just reading the halo stories.. ;) |
 xMShadow icex 2006-04-21 . chapter 2kick ** man! great story cant wate for more chapters |
 highlandbrute 2006-04-14 . chapter 2like you said a bit short
but non the less pretty good
apart from a few spelling errors eg appose? its oppose |
 highlandbrute 2006-03-31 . chapter 1very good im a fan of kotor myself |