O my god...please update soon...

I FREAKING love this FREAKING story!

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ha!thats last paragraph ws funny. i can imagine Tyson doing dat. anyway pls update soon this soon. i really liked the first story and so far the sequel is great! poor Tala and Brooklyn. and poor Kai!

more please!

nice chapter! update soon please!

Great story/chapter. :3 You should write longer chapters, though. And maybe more smexy ... *coughrapecough* scenes. >

great story, update quicker please! =D

please keep updating

I love it! That was really original! I can't help but feel a bit sorry for poor Kai though... Death might be kinder on him than you are! Thanks for writing it!

keep updating this story please i love it and i really want to know what happens

this is really good! though i do feel really bad for kai and brooklyn. oh well, update soon plz!

poor Kai, And Brook. That's sad man. I"m sad *goes to cry and eat lots of chocolate ice cream*

Update soon cuz I really have to know what happens now. YOu don't have a choice, you must update. Why you ask? Cuz I'm a queen, and every body has to obay the queen

This is good!
I'm guessing all the Tala and Bladebreaker bits were just hollograms or hallucinations of some sort?
Excellent so far but it seems WAY too easy.

Update soon!

Dark Kaiser

...thats it? well ok, update soon plz!

Aww, that wass sad. HOw chould you do that to poor Kai. I"m going to cry. *starts to tear up* See

Well great story I hope you update soon I really like it.

PS. KAI PLEASE BE OKAY!