aw! this was rely cute! it works perfectly well as a oneshot! the way u ended it made it work as a one shot! it was overall well written, but the way that it was formatted made it kinda confusing. although, overall the storyline was pretty creative and cute. ive read a few things that r kinda similar, but urs had ur own unique touches to it! overall, really good job!

WO!

That was an AWESOME story!

too bad its a one shot, i would have loved to have known what happened after that!

Tee Hee That was cute. I loved the ending. Great job.

No HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME :'( I MEAN YOU CAN WRITE now that was good you should consiter writing more to the story _

its good

That was a great story but i don't get why you are't writing more to it.

You realy have a way with words!

you really should write a sequel

[clapping] this was a really good story. eventhough it is just a one-shot, it's still good! i loved it!

Konichiwa, Pannychan! (I wrote "You're Not Alone") Thanx for reviewing my chapters! I feel inspired! *sniffle* I really liked ur fic, kawaii idea! *whisper* and we can all agree that Trunks is DEFINATELY a bishi...no doubt about that, ne? The only thing I found wrong about ur story was...nothing! . Oh, and I really liked the "Chrissy looked at Trunks like a child that got caught with her hand in the cookie jar." That was definately original! . Oh, if u double space instead of single space in between suff...like:

"blah blah blah." doing something.

"another person speaking..."blah blah.

INSTEAD OF:

"blah blah blah." doing something.

"another person speaking..."blah blah.

It makes it cleaner AND *yes, there is a bonus* LONGER!

That was it? ! More! More! MORE! I looooooooove your story and I want !

well its a great story but you might want to space it out a little bit (just my opinion) otherwise its great and WRITE SEQUEL OR A SECOND CHAPTER!

i think u shud definately continue this story!i wanna see how it ends!ur not being fair!write more!iwant more!i want more!hehe!i love these pan and trunks stories andu write them really well!i think chrissy shud be killed really nastily for insulting pan that way!Pan is the best!aswell as trunks!i hope u write another chapter!:)

i like the story! too bad there is only one chapter.. great story!

WHAT ONLY ONE CHAPTER! :(

it was very good exsept you said trunks ran after trunks that was the only problem and th e fact that you didnt let pan get a least one fuckin punch at chrissy

how could you stop here? anyways contiune it soon i loved it