Reviews for To Fall Behind the Eyes

Reviews For: To Fall Behind the Eyes

KeyKeeper12 2007-08-21 ch 7,	abuseCortez:Gee I wonder what could possibly happen in that chappie, and will it require a doctor? KK: Probably, so I guess you should get scrubbed in since you’re the attending physician on this fic. Cortez: Scrubbed in? Scrubbed what? Err..alright then...When in Rome and all...where's the shower run off too?? KK: Oi! snaps fingers so that Cortez is decked out in surgeon's garb and equipped with a high tech laser marker dohicky/thingamabob for editing purposes. (Technical term by the by) Looks like you may need to go over what's already posted too. Cortez: Oi yourself! I'm exhausted! We've been up all day getting you ready for start of term, and now you go and say, "It's time to start doctoring fanfic!" Oh no, no, no, I'm taking a nice, hot shower and going to bed. I'll tend to stories in the morning! Snaps his outfit and tools into the nearest closet. KK: Bloody hell, they didn't need that even if the fic is R rated... Cortez: Blushes furiously, snaps some other form of clothing back on, and then walks off whistling the traditional song of professed innocence.* Show's over folks! Move along, nothing to see here... KK: Obviously... Cortez: Hey wait, didn't you just insult yourself? KK: Not really...you have a body all your own...it's just not so easy to see most of the time...but that's enough out of you anyway...snaps fingers to compel disillusionment and silencing charms on to Cortez, then smiles and walks off Buenas Noches Amigos!
KeyKeeper12 2007-08-21 ch 4,	abuseHaving read this chapter, I can tell that you have no small need of a beta service dear one. Hehe. Did you happen to send an email when you returned? I did not receive one, but it's entirely possible that the little beast got lost somewhere in cyberspcae. I sent a message to the address listed on this site; if you have not yet found a replacement beta, be sure to send future chapters to that email. No worries now that I think we have both returned and remembered certain obligations. I do, however, sincerley hope that I don't come to the last posted chapter only to find some other note about your taking leave again. Ah well, I suppose the past and future can't be helped all that much. We shall see, and until we speak again, blessed be.
.Baby.Moony. 2007-06-28 ch 7,	abuseBah, what the hell is that **? Damnit! Update! ASAP! Hehe, I like it a lot. You're a very good writer. There were very few mispells and maybe one or two extra/missing words or whatever. If you need a beta, I'd be happy to help you ^.^ Just PM me if you do. It was a really great chapter and keep up the good work!
fufu.a.k.a.speechless 2007-06-18 ch 4,	abuseyay, interesting. I hope you update soon...
SoraIsRikus 2007-06-07 ch 3,	abuseit so sad...but so good...please update soon...
TheBoltShapedScar 2006-05-20 ch 3,	abuseI liked the way you kind of forged the endings of chapter 2 and 3 together. That was just great! Draco's dilemma was described very nicely. I'll look forward for the next chapter!! And one question: Is this written as if HBP hasn't come out yet, or just as a slightly AU with Dumbledore alive?? And by the way: I'd like to see one of the PoV which we've already had once more... no Ron or Hermione telling the story, please!
TheBoltShapedScar 2006-05-20 ch 1,	abuseHD is not really my fav pairing, but I just thought I would give it a chance, and I'm glad I did. It was awesome, all this stuff Snape's thinking... I'm looking forward to see how Harry survived and how the HD conflict goes on...
emeraud.silver 2006-04-03 ch 2,	abuseO freak!!, dont b mean and stop ryt there..wuah!! it was getting all kewl and it stoped.. juz lyk a period.. i cudnt find the ">" button...wah!! o well, update really soon!
ri-chan05 2006-04-03 ch 2,	abusePlease! Put more Draco/ Harry in the next chapter...I just love that pairing...and I think you should bring Remus into the story a bit more as well...but hey that's only MY opinion. ;P
Ari Uchiha 2006-04-03 ch 2,	abuseupdate soon please
KeyKeeper12 2006-04-03 ch 2,	abuseI noticed St. Mungo's still masquerading as St. Mugeo's, but that can be fixed with a simple Find/Replace. Good changes otherwise, and I'm obviously looking forward to more:) Cortez: Hey Keeper, are we going to have to maim her now? KeyKeeper12: No no you silly phadian! I told her after all, and she likes you so Quietus! Oh, uhh, err, sorry. There I go again. Anyways, take care, and if some guy comes after you throwing what looks like lots of wandless magic around, (I say looks like b/c we all know that only Dumbledore can really do wandless magic hehe) umm, uh, anyways, if that happens, umm... RUN! That is unless of course you wish to be covered with spaghetti sauce and some other less pleasant items. Good day and God bless!
lil-bugga 2006-04-03 ch 2,	abusei love it, please update asap
KeyKeeper12 2006-04-02 ch 1,	abuseI like the Snape PoV here! The cobmined self-corrections (kidsadults) might make it a little confusing for some readers, but I thought they cemented the chapter's mood rather well. Draco's line "Just go Professor. I am fine, stop worrying. Nothing is wrong, everything is fine. Just please go." seems a bit excessive. Perhaps you just have him say "I'm fine" and leave the rest to body language and thoughts. Good job on the Snape Harry dialogue. Now I'd better quit reading fic before my unfinished paper comes up due. Good day and God bless!
Shakespeares Whore 2006-03-30 ch 1,	abusei like. its intersting.

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