why did you stop writing? i wanna know what happens!

That was so cute. I want to read more of this story please.

OK, get back to work on this one - I just found it, while looking for other stuff under your name, and it needs finishing! I will eventually find every one that you have out there, and bug you until those unfinished get finished.

So sad it breaks my heart! Come back soon!

(quote)A/N2: If anyone is still interested in reading this story please review. I know I promised to always finish a story I'm writing, but if no one is reading this one there is no point. I can concentrate on one of my other stories, like Landslide.

IM INTERESTED! lol. this is starting out 2 be a great story!!

This story is very good. A little to much swearing in my opinion(but thats just me) but I still like it. Please update!

I would like to know what is going to happen in this story. I see that you have not updated in a while, but I have a feeling that you wil bring this story back with a venegance.

Take care and God Bless.

~PJ~

I just found this story and I love it so far!! It looks like you haven't updated in a while, but I hope you can change that. Please update soon!!

I like it! And I'm interested to see where it's going. I hope you don't stop writing. *Adds to story alert* Keep up the good work!

Denni

I'm still interested. I'm definitely still interested. Out of all your stories, this one caught my interest the most and even though “Listen to Me” is still my all time favorite, I think this one is a close second.
You've got both an interesting as well as unique way of telling this story. I don't know how you do it, but all your stories seem to hold...I don't know how to describe it...maybe it's your style or your voice. Whatever it is, I've loved every single one of your stories and I hope you'll be able to finish this one; if not I understand.
Keep up the good work. Happy New Year! (Even if it is a little late to say that :)
JainaSolo18

Discovered your stories sometimes ago buy surfing the net for some news Roswell stories!... and I love them all So I'm looking forward for update...

EVE

God, Chica! You had me crying!

Well actually, you had me doing a happy dance when I wandered into the Roswell section to FINALLY reveiw NJAG2... Then I saw you'd updated this!

You know, your song choices are so right on. How on earth do you manage to find just the right song to convey the tone of the story? It's amazing.

Ok so on to the rest of my revew: I was kinda disappointed we didn't get to see Michael. I half expected him to be breaking down the door after Liz's revelation the night before... Oh well, ANY M/L interaction is always good in my book. I was happy to see them talking and laughing a bit.

As for Michael, hilarious introduction into the family! I was trying to figure out how you would fit Michael into things. It's a little odd that everyone thinks he can do no wrong. Yeah, Izzy obviously... But Diane? It's just gonna be amusing to see those family dynamics.

The point that had me crying was when he said that Tess used to say "poor baby" all the time. Just the power of having to live with those memories. It's sad. I can't say I LIKE the fact that he loved Tess that much, but it's your story, so I'm not gonna moan about it. As long as Liz is there to hold him when he cries.

Ok I think I told you before that I demand that you finish all your stories. (Bossy I know!) But I figure I'll tell you again. I WANT to know what happens in all of your AU's. They're just too compelling not to know what happens next!

Now my lazy ** is off to provide more comments on your other story. :-)

Has it really taken me this long to reveiw? *Checks calandar* Yup... Ok so does absence make the heart fonder? If it does, maybe you'll be happy to see my reveiw and ignore that it took me WAAY too long to submit it, even though I've read the new chapter thrice. (Yup, I like it!)

I'M VERY HAPPY THAT YOU'RE CONTINUING THIS! I always thought that this had the potential to be one of your best stories. Interesting that Tess was actually decent in this one. Max's reaction to her death breaks my heart!

I like how Liz ends up meeting Max again. (yeah I know, that took place in previous chapters, but I figured I'd add it since I had to reread the whole thing from the start.)

Having Max think about how Liz was doing during the middle of the storm was nice. It showed that he still cares about *something* even though he's depressed out of his mind. *AWW* he knows Liz cares about him! Sweet!

I wanna know what's the story with Michael? Brothers perhaps? And how in the hell did he manage to recognize Liz's voice immediately? Are they friends or something?

Maury: Hilarous! Don't we all do that at some point in time when Life is crappy and we want to distain someone else?

Ok still a weak reveiw by my standards, but honestly, it's almost midnight and I'm TIRED. Write more when you can, I know how hard that can be... In the meantime, eagerly awaiting more! ;-)

Details:

Brushing imaginary specks of lent - should read lint
Michel grabbed his brother lifting him to his feet. - Michael

Impressions:

I think you missed the mark with Max in chapter two. He doesn't seem right to me. I think he's a lot better in chapter three. Is there a way you could integrate the description in three with the events in two?

I am actually disappointed that its done. :(

I would certianly like to know the rest of the story.

By title I didn't remember this story, but once I opened it up and began to read the first chapter I remembered that I HAD read the beginning of this story. Good to see you sticking to your stories and finishing them- I can't say the same for myself, sadly. Anyway, good job on the chapter! It's an interesting plot and I can definitely see interesting possibilities. :)