Reviews for Valentine's Day

Reviews For: Valentine's Day

My-Lover-Gren-Gren 2007-02-18 ch 7,	abuseLove it, as always : )
Soccer-Bitch 2006-11-02 ch 7,	abuseawesome story. i liked it. ^_^
Lady Rin-San 2006-04-16 ch 7,	abuseFinally! No interruptions! Ok...there was a few...but I conquered them all! MUHA! EXCELLENT! TOTALLY AWESOME FANFIC! OMG! I LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! THE LIBRARIAN IS DOWN! YES! MUHA! lol! See ya later! XD
JacobedRose 2006-04-11 ch 7,	abuseIt seems she is keeping up this tradition of losing their vests. Nice job! I can't wait for your next story, and Morgan will certainly have teasing rights!
hotchner 2006-04-11 ch 7,	abuseI really loved the whole Story. The last Chapter was an Ace in the Hole. I loved how you made Reid kiss Chris. I hope the next time Chris pays attention to what Hotch is telling her though. She had Hotch very upset with her. I can't wait to read the next Story that you post. Keep up the EXCELLENT Writing.
RogueHoney 2006-04-11 ch 7,	abusegreat ending. amazing writing. post some more reid stories soon!
lovely-whisper 2006-04-07 ch 6,	abuseYou left me hanging... Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next.
RogueHoney 2006-04-04 ch 6,	abuseo. i so knew it was a woman! the minute they said green's first victim was his wife but this killer's first victim was a man! i win! haha. well maybe not. update this story soon!
hotchner 2006-04-03 ch 6,	abuseI hope that Morgan and JJ don't end up dead. I hope that Hotch and Gideon will be able to find them in time. KEEP UP THE EXCELLENT WRITING! CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER!
JacobedRose 2006-04-02 ch 6,	abuseOh! Are they going to be okay? What a horrible time for your cell phone to die! Please update soon!
coldfiredragon 2006-04-02 ch 2,	abuseOh god, I could just see the kids that Spence and Chris could have. They would be so cute running around quoting Shakespeare at five and Einstein at seven. Good chapter.
graywords-girl 2006-04-01 ch 4,	abuseHey there. Well, let me say this: I like the series you have going. It's nice to see an OC that actually fits into a story snug, instead of one that seems like a pair of mismatched shoes. You have unique ideas, and update fairly quickly, and do an excellent job of getting the characters (both from the show and of your own creation) IC. It's refreshing! And the fact that you actually finish your stories is nice to. Now, with all the praise, I also have to mention this: I think you focus too often on Hotch and Chris's relationship, and not enough on Reid and Chris. Yes, Hotch does make a very good father figure, as does Gideon, but too much of it is a bit overwhelming and only diminishes the story. It would be nice to see Chris and Reid acting out their roles as boyfriend and girlfriend in normal context, unlike the small snipets you pull out here and there. When you do that, it make the scenes not only seem choppy, but out of place and unexpected. Anywho, keep on writing. These are great stories that I can't wait to read more of. ~Jass
lallyb1743 2006-03-30 ch 4,	abuseI like the story/plot. But there is not enough Reid/Chris.
Jillie chan 2006-03-30 ch 4,	abuseI love how you always have more than one chapter ready at a time. See you soon.
JacobedRose 2006-03-29 ch 4,	abuseVery nice job, I'm glad you're writing a new story! The interactions with the team and with her sister, but I got to say my favorite part was when her sister saw her stick her hand in the vic's chest and told her to go wash her hands! Great job with Chris and Spencer and the end scene! Please update soon!

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