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Reviews for: Pieces on the Ground
Goomba
2006-05-26 . chapter 1
Perfect. Sweet, sad and perfect. Thank you.
Cheers Jen
Space rebel
2006-04-22 . chapter 1
Loved your story. Definitely tears forming. I think you've got Kaylee right, I can so see her looking after Wash's dinosaurs and worrying about Serenity and everybody else no matter how hurt she was.
Mya Croft
2006-04-04 . chapter 1
ok i admit it. i cried! wonderfully written. Kaylee keeping the dinosaurs is excactly what i would expect her to do. well done.
Littetat
2006-04-01 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh,I cried. That made me cry. I have never read a fanfic that made me cry. For a short fic, that was powerful.
Don't know if you plan too but maybe you can keep this going? Would like to read more about this.

Nice job. Keep writing.
Littletat
angeloneous
2006-03-30 . chapter 1
That was an excellent beginning =) If you have it in you, I would love for this to keep going. It is just perfect - the emotions and the characterizations. Beautiful!
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