*sob* It made me so sad Poor Jack.

*sobs some more*

...god damn it.

Now I need to go write something for this fandom.

Oh, yeah, I was looking at a Wikipedia article for this movie, and then I googled some terms about an apparent lawsuit that resulted because a substitute teacher showed the movie in class, and there's a website that's completely against homosexuality. Can you believe that? Those people make me so mad.

Jei

I think what you've described could perhaps be attributed to similiar real life situations where one is initated into a new practice - but in reality isn't that actually what happens with a man and woman? At any rate - hope you'll consider continuing this story and hopefully allowing Ennis to finally face that love that Jack has for him. Thanks for the story.

*crying*

You just LOVE to sadden my day, don't you? Oh' well...

By the way, great as ever!

You know I find it funny that the stories on this site that are just Ok and need some work get a whole lot of reviews about how wonderful they are but the ones that are truly wonderful not much say goes to them. I know a lot of good stories get the #'s in but some like yours never enough as they should get.

"Ever consider stop this, Jack? Shoot that hurt me, that was a gut wrenching line. You built up to this moment just fine and you ended it gracefully.

I really enjoyed this, you did a great job.

I'd really love to knock there heads together. :o)

It is 12:18 and I just finished reading it I have to say that I do agree with you about how ennis held some type of resentment or anger towards jack especially at the end of the movie. I really enjoyed reading it.