Amazing fic! ... I'm trying to come up with suting complements that don't sound cheezy and draw a blank. How about this is one of the best fics I have read in a long time? Um, spectacular, wonderful, truly magnificant? Do those work? And, thanx to you, I have an idea. (Not copying yours in any way, it was just a simple sentance that sparked something unrelated.) Anyway, LOVE IT! (Excuse the spelling, I know that there were a lot of errors. Spellcheck is my friend.) :P

Boy am I glad you let your mind wander, when the result is this fic!
This is very VERY good. The subject, the drama, the POV, all perfect!
Thanks for sharing.

Beautiful. Simply stunning.

What I like about it especially is that it answers questiosn left in the Gravi series. If Kitazawa could see what he had done to Eiri, he probably would have seen hell.

First off I must complement you on the title of this story. It's very clever. And I love how you used it at the end. I know how hard it is to end a story in a special, memorable way and I'm impressed at how well you pulled it off.

It's such an interesting twist to have Yuki (older Yuki) narrate. I rather wish that (insert scathing insult here) actually could see what he did to that poor boy and how Eiri's suffered from the effects of that night. I usually like villains but I sure loathe Yuki Kitazawa. I can only hope he had something really horrific happen in his past to make him that sadistic.

I hope I'll see more fics from you in the future. You have a real gift.

Wow! That was a wonderful piece! I love your writing style! 3 And I'm glad Kitazawa feels guilty, because he SHOULD. But I feel bad for Yuki... -cries- I love this part, "Dante didn't know what Hell really was... but I do." That was stunning! -applauds you- AMAZING! -faves-

0.0 So sad... So well written...

wow.

Beautiful. It really makes you think, you know, if there is a hell, if watching Eiri would really be his punishment? To see everything he'd done to him. Because I honestly think Kitizawa was not an EVIL human being, maybe just a...** up one?

We'll never know.

Wonderful story!