 shigemoto 2009-01-24 . chapter 1Beautifully short. Leaves so much to the imagination. That is usually frustrating, but somehow perfect here. Nicely done. |
 Eldr-Fire 2009-01-10 . chapter 1Ooh! Good story! The description was all very good and painted a lovely picture in my mind. |
 shattered-words 2009-01-08 . chapter 1sweet and very interesting. i'm not the biggest sakura fan. admittedly, she's in the top five of the least favorite characters in naruto. however, that was a good, short fic. her trying to bridge the distance between her and her instructor and not in a romantic way as so many people do. very well written. |
 Illucida 2008-11-09 . chapter 1This is a very pleasent and soft fic. It left me with a sense of hope. Also, after reading the last line of the story, 'Every Heart' started playing in my head. This flowed very nicely, and was reminiscent to how a movie would be ended. |
 Rashaka 2008-06-12 . chapter 1This, like so many of your Naruto stories, is poignant and emotional, but never cheap. You somehow find this deep well of angst in the most mundane and mild descriptions of setting, in the most simple and honest dialogue. I may be a fan of Kakashi/Sakura as an older, AU pairing, but I also love the teacher/student dynamic of Kakashi and Team 7. And sadly, not enough fics show Kakashi and Sakura relating in this way... as friends, teammates, adult-to-child, and as a generation regret sorta thing. Excellent and lovely. I like that this one had hope. |
 RedBrunja 2008-06-09 . chapter 1Oh, subtle and delicious. |
 beautyinsleep 2008-02-02 . chapter 1Loved it. This was very well-written, and the imagery was perfect. I especially loved your characterizations of Sakura and Kakashi--they were both very real. |
 Tryptophan36 2008-01-07 . chapter 1Very nice. Beautiful imagery. It all comes together in the end. lyrical and descriptive, hard to find qualities. Thank you. |
 Unlucky-amulet 2007-08-02 . chapter 1Very atmospheric...I like the small details of the ice and rain. A really sweet scene between Kakashi and Sakura. Kind of made me want to read on,that ending, but sadly this is a oneshot.
One thing I would say is that you could have spaced out the paragraphs a little more. Made them less blocky, but I really enjoyed this fic.
~Amulet |
 causeiambetta 2007-03-06 . chapter 1the writting style and exposition was really good. but i just couldn't see the kakashi x sakura here, or it didn't sound believable. |
 une see 2007-01-26 . chapter 1I loved it! The imagery was amazing. xD |
 Trespasser1307 2007-01-01 . chapter 1How is it you only have fifteen reviews? I love the way that you wrote Sakura and Kakashi-- very realistic and bittersweet. This is the best Sakura fic I've read in a while.
Yep, I've finally matured enough so that I can read a fic about her and not bash it. So proud of myself. o.o. Haha. |
 ixr 2006-11-04 . chapter 1simple, but yet it was so wistful, beautiful, and realistic. i loved the mood. |
 garnet-wind 2006-07-10 . chapter 1 Unbelievably real and wonderfully atmospheric. |
 UE 2006-06-02 . chapter 1i need to stop reading sakura fics by good authors. it's making me not-hate her...
so i read the summary and got all excited and assumed that YAY SASUKE IS THE ANGEL OF THE RAIN!
then kakashi comes up and asks, "Are you all right?" and "something I can do for you?" and i think to myself YAY KAKASHI IS THE ANGEL OF THE RAIN!
but then: "It doesn't have to be the way it was."
be still my heart. and this is a sakura that i'm sure is in the canon but that i keep forcing myself not to see.
and like some other reviewers said, the atmosphere was perfect. the whole thing played out like a movie in my end, even more vividly than with most things i've read, fic or otherwise. but i guess witnessing perfection tends to have that effect on me. |