Reviews for Angel of the Rain

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Rashaka 2008-06-12 ch 1,	abuseThis, like so many of your Naruto stories, is poignant and emotional, but never cheap. You somehow find this deep well of angst in the most mundane and mild descriptions of setting, in the most simple and honest dialogue. I may be a fan of Kakashi/Sakura as an older, AU pairing, but I also love the teacher/student dynamic of Kakashi and Team 7. And sadly, not enough fics show Kakashi and Sakura relating in this way... as friends, teammates, adult-to-child, and as a generation regret sorta thing. Excellent and lovely. I like that this one had hope.
RedBrunja 2008-06-09 ch 1,	abuseOh, subtle and delicious.
beautyinsleep 2008-02-02 ch 1,	abuseLoved it. This was very well-written, and the imagery was perfect. I especially loved your characterizations of Sakura and Kakashi--they were both very real.
Tryptophan36 2008-01-07 ch 1,	abuseVery nice. Beautiful imagery. It all comes together in the end. lyrical and descriptive, hard to find qualities. Thank you.
Unlucky-amulet 2007-08-02 ch 1,	abuseVery atmospheric...I like the small details of the ice and rain. A really sweet scene between Kakashi and Sakura. Kind of made me want to read on,that ending, but sadly this is a oneshot. One thing I would say is that you could have spaced out the paragraphs a little more. Made them less blocky, but I really enjoyed this fic. ~Amulet
causeiambetta 2007-03-06 ch 1,	abusethe writting style and exposition was really good. but i just couldn't see the kakashi x sakura here, or it didn't sound believable.
une see 2007-01-26 ch 1,	abuseI loved it! The imagery was amazing. xD
Trespasser1307 2007-01-01 ch 1,	abuseHow is it you only have fifteen reviews? I love the way that you wrote Sakura and Kakashi-- very realistic and bittersweet. This is the best Sakura fic I've read in a while. Yep, I've finally matured enough so that I can read a fic about her and not bash it. So proud of myself. o.o. Haha.
jellygrl 2006-11-04 ch 1,	abusesimple, but yet it was so wistful, beautiful, and realistic. i loved the mood.
garnet-wind 2006-07-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseUnbelievably real and wonderfully atmospheric.
UE 2006-06-02 ch 1,	abusei need to stop reading sakura fics by good authors. it's making me not-hate her... so i read the summary and got all excited and assumed that YAY SASUKE IS THE ANGEL OF THE RAIN! then kakashi comes up and asks, "Are you all right?" and "something I can do for you?" and i think to myself YAY KAKASHI IS THE ANGEL OF THE RAIN! but then: "It doesn't have to be the way it was." be still my heart. and this is a sakura that i'm sure is in the canon but that i keep forcing myself not to see. and like some other reviewers said, the atmosphere was perfect. the whole thing played out like a movie in my end, even more vividly than with most things i've read, fic or otherwise. but i guess witnessing perfection tends to have that effect on me.
Twin Sun Leader 2006-04-10 ch 1,	abuseReally accurate writting here... I love the quiet feeling this one gives. Kind of sad, but not exactly. Sakura's voice is great, and the way you describe Kakashi is just so him ^^. thx for sharing :)
sna 2006-04-02 ch 1,	abuseI really loved reading this one, so thank you for putting it up Loren! The white sky and the rain and the black umbrella and sakura's pink hair gave it all the visualized texture of one of those really simple and elegant paintings they do out in Japan... or so I thought. All fine lines and precise brushstrokes and such. Anyway, that's how I felt when I read this. So thank you again. :)
ElasticBobaTurtle 2006-03-31 ch 1,	abuseThere was a constant and beautiful mood that really made this story strong. Quiet and sensitive; great interactions. Wonderful work.
wellduh... 2006-03-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseUnspeakably pretty. Love the imagery and mood. And love it because it's Sakura and Kakashi and those two never get time together, ever. I love how you have Sakura written here, how you can see she's changed.

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