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Alkira Sonoma
2006-07-21
ch 13,
abuselol Horatio wants his sunglasses back!
So what might the pairing be?
Greg x Cheryl
or
Nick x Cheryl
hm...
Female Greg with Greg! O.o
Cheyl and Greg =P
Love the story! =P
Moonsault
2006-04-21
ch 13, anon.
abuseOMG, I wanted to send you a review for soo long, so i finally managed it!!

I absolutley LOVE your Series, i read all of it from the very beginning and and i think this story is absolutley awesome!!

I love the way you write this whole thing, and the way you make everyone really looking forward to the next chapters!! Really, awesome job!

(I hope Nick and Cheryl get together in the next chapters somehow, that would be cute ^^)

Anyway, great job, keep up writing (greets from Germany)
littlemissprincess721
2006-04-19
ch 13,
abuseIt is trained like a puppy though! A ferrett haha cute idea!! Cheryl deffinitely has some unique pets!

wow can't wait for the next chapter!
wraiths-angel
2006-04-19
ch 13,
abusethis was a really good, chapter and looking forward to finding out what happens, are nick and cheryl goignt o be together becuase i think they would be great if they did!
Cassandra Jean
2006-04-18
ch 13,
abuseThis was the greatest chapter ever! You had me laughing so hard. I loved matchmaker Catherine, conspiring to get Nick and Cheryl together. Finding excuses as to why Nick was the only reasonable one that Cheryl could stay with while waiting for her house to be finished.

However, the greatest thing of all is Horatio. I loved the part when he called Cheryl at the hospital and yelled at her for getting shot. Poor Nick, having to talk to Horatio because Cheryl chickened out; can not blame him for doing so either, but to actually hang up on him? Does he really have a death wish?

Favorite quote:
'You should really try being on the other end of his disapproving stare, when he doesn’t have his shades on.’
‘And you should try not doing anything that warrants me having to fly out here.’

Of course Horatio would be calling from inside the hospital. Thank you for finally getting him to Vegas. And yes, I think that he should be having that talk with Sara...without the glasses so then she has to look at his disapproving glare.

Will be looking forward to the next installment. Keep up the great work!
daynaa.
2006-04-18
ch 13,
abuseo I CAN'T WAIT FOR STREETRACING!
hahaha wow that sounds really intense, and something Cheryl would do hahahah wow. And this talk with Sara and Cheryl, can't wait for that either. I enjoyed this chapter muchly because Horatio was in it haha and I liked the phone conversation, a lot!
Can't wait for portion seven!
littlemissprincess721
2006-04-17
ch 12,
abuseWow! I love this story! Cheryl is a very interesting character, I really like the way you developed her through the series!

Oh wow I really hope everything gets resolved between Sarah and Cheryl!

I am soo on edge wondering what this present is! haha I want it to be a puppy! That would be funny...

Anyway, good job, and keep writing!

Jenni :)
wraiths-angel
2006-04-17
ch 12,
abusethis was really good and looking forward to the next chapter!
Cassandra Jean
2006-04-17
ch 12,
abuseOnly one more chapter left? There is going to be another installment to the series though, right? Oh well, I digress. I loved this chapter. Glad to see that Grissom is going to have "words" with Sara. Although I think she needs more than words.
Very happy to see that Nick stuck around the hospital all night...very sweet. And the thought of another Greg running around the lab, just frightening!

Favorite part:
'And on that note, you also know where I am when you decide to return my sunglasses. Take care, don’t speed, and don’t get shot.

All my love, Horatio'

Made me laugh. Did she honestly expect that Horatio would not figure out that she stole his sunglasses? Or that he knew her well enough to have to warn her against speeding and getting shot?

Keep up the great work. And don't keep me waiting on the next update...I'm kind of currious to see what Eric picked out as a birthday gift seeing as the box is moving.
daynaa.
2006-04-16
ch 12,
abuseahhahahahahahha wow i loved those letters a lot, and "I think it's moving." Very intense! And the Nick-Cheryl-ness. Loving it muchly, I just love the CSI Cheryl series muchly in general, keep it up!
daynaa.
2006-04-16
ch 11,
abuseawesomee chapter, explaining Cheryl's whole life haha. Intense!! I hope that Sara does stayed exiled for long though!
Update Son!
Cassandra Jean
2006-04-15
ch 11,
abuseOh Yeah, about time that somebody droped a house on that witch!

Best line goes to our dear Cheryl, and can say it best:
was it really a good enough reason for you to, and I can’t describe it as anything else, a good enough reason for you to be nothing more than a complete bitch to me?

I do so hope that Sara is going to get a good smack down from somebody, other than Cheryl that is, in the next chapter for all the crap that she has pulled. I am glad to see that everybody, including Griss, is disapointed in her behavior. Then again, if Uncle H is on his way to town then maybe he can take care of the problem.

And don't think that I didn't notice the hand holding going on between Cheryl and Nick throughout the last two chapters. Is it too much to ask hope for if I see a little bit more than friendship in their future?

Don't keep me waiting for the next chapter!
Cassandra Jean
2006-04-15
ch 10,
abuseAlright, trying this again, because the system refused my review the first time around for some reason.

First of all, welcome back from spring break. Glad that you had fun. However, next time can you not keep me waiting in suspense for a whole week waiting to see who was going to be shot! Although I knew that Cheryl was going to get shot, she is not lucky enough to escape her first day unscathed.

My favorite part was when she woke up and asked if Horatio was coming:
He didn’t say. What he did say, was something along the lines of, please let her know, as soon as she wakes up, that I am the first in a long line of people here, that will make her wish she hadn’t woken up.’
Cheryl groaned and sank back into the pillows. ‘Yeah, he’s coming here.’

All I have to say: Bring on Horatio!
And as for Sara, can someone drop a bucket of water on her and see if she melts? Gosh she is such a witch! I can not believe that she has the nerve to bring all that stuff from Cheryl's past up while she is sitting in a hospital bed recovering from being shot. I really do not understand what is behind all Sara's hostility.
Anna
2006-04-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseDear God. Cheryl is fiercly Mary Sue.
daynaa.
2006-04-08
ch 9,
abuseahhaha poor cheryl and her first day shootings, or will it change and Nick will be the one to get shot? Hmm, have to wait a WEEK! haha, well I definetly can't wait for the update!! Great chapter!
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