Definitely a new take on the tale, and very welly done.

tht was a good one-shot...n i am a huge zutara fan

-zukoluver45

This was hilarious! I like your parody sarcasm. Very nice.

As a Zutarian, it's nice to see a non-Zutarian who's willing to try it out.

Wow, I loved that. I've read it before and it always make me smile. I know you don't ship Zutara but hot fart, I think this was a good rendition of both characters staying IN character. And I still have some hope at the end of the story-that one kiss could lead to others, as time and distance changes the memory of what actually happened in the cave to something sweeter. Or not. LOL!

Still, love it and love the Zutara in it. Very good!

Fate

Not meaning to insult anyone, but I was greatly amused that this story got more reviews than your others. I, as a Zutarian (your typo "Zatarans" in the AN cracked me up, made us sound like the New Orleans rice stuff they advertise on TV), found this funny, unlikely, and slightly OOC for the both of them (as helium lost said for Katara, her talkativeness, and then as you said- er, I think it was you-for Zuko probably his willingness to kiss her), but for an exercise I hope it helped you. Made me laugh.

You're really an amazing author, I kind of worship you. (sheepish)

i enjoyed it

This was hillarious. I love quirky Zutara stories, and yours fits that category perfectly.

I LOVED IT! It was so much better then the real ending of the Cave of two Lovers episode. No offense to the writers or anything but it was the wierdest episode ever. I only like the part where The hippie was singing. lol. I loved it! The characters weren't OOC at all except for the part where Zuko kissed her but we have to bend the rules some times! I loved it! Keep writing!

"Well, damn it, he /was/ a man." Heh, I love that line. XD Anywho, yeah, Zuko being in the cave WAS kind of random... but oh well. Your characterization of Katara was a little bit off in that I don't know if she would talk so much, but your characterization of Zuko seemed on-the-spot—huffy, irritated easily, calling Katara 'peasant'... Heh, fantastic. Maybe not so good of a "omgzplotawesome" fic, but fantastic as a "omgzwhatif" fic :P Still three thumbs up anyway.

- hl

that was a cute take on the cave of two lovers! i liked it!

O.M.G! I loved it! that was so sweet and funny! *adds to favs list*I truly liked it way better than the one on t.v. i am totaly zutara!

Awesome! I was so upset when I watched The Cave of Two Lovers and saw it was Kataang, this should have been in that episode! Please update soon!

I think I liked that even better than the actual episode. Please continue your story!

If only this happened in the real episode then every Zutarian would be screaming in pure joy. Nice version. :) I wish this really happened...